feel the swetty palm-then a silent calm-
before the realizm-
trogects the potential mechenizm-
into kinetic-
from a child defiled but resolves the manner
with the hammer how pathetic-
felt the movement as he took me out his jacket-
wanted to see in curiosity just then........ there's racket-
FIRST goes the echo-bellow as the heat blow-
MELLOW SCENE BURN IN INFERNO-all in slow mode-
the trigger cocked-thats my alarm clock-
hammer docked-
i awoke-fallowed by a trail of smoke-
as the gun spoke-
they say i dont have any name but once they pull it-
amidst bullshit- i here someone scream bullet-
only know one path-point forward pull toward-
do the math- grasp-a gasp-and a wund clasped-
but im trying-to warn my victoms crying-
as i break the sound barrier its to late someone's dying-
hell no not this way-but hold up there's a delay-
to lead me estray-a lil child spraid when i envade left too lay-
god damn me she just wanted to play-
but sadly for her got in the way of a BULLET gone stray-
i hate myself took her 5 years of innoscence-
from my owners adolesent vidictious-ignorance-
insert-in eyes-exert her mind- she only five im only a nine-
4 years difference-
oh shit-a ricochet-effect- grazed another kid left with brain defects-
all this and to think i was the only one to eject-
man can go to hell-to say we dont feel-
im cursing myself-i wish there was no life in cold steel-
but sadly there is blood painted as an artist-
im holding on the hardest-
took 2 lives and ruined another but never even found my target-damn

UPPIN

If this is true then I give my condolences and can only say I'm sorry. The song is ill, I like the way it flowed great imagery and your vocab. captured the deep emotion in the piece. The topic is somewhat played but a harsh reminder of the things we go through in life. overall I would give this a 9/10. There wasn't a single thing I would change. And staying true to form I will leave my favorite line/bar from the song as a closing. 1

"FIRST goes the echo-bellow as the heat blow-
MELLOW SCENE BURN IN INFERNO-all in slow mode"-nice shit right there.

THNX BUT I NEVER SEEN A SONG FROM THE PERCEPTION OF A BULLET TRAVELING

UPPIN

damn bud, i don't understand how you can constantly be dropping, and never go over the same shit, its like every one of your drops are iller then the last, mad props to you dawg...

I DONT SEE THIS AS PLAYED WHO HAS EVER TAKEN A BULLETS PERSPECTIVE ON THIS

This wasn't the best topic i seen you do, but thats down to choice, word always droppin with alot of skill, this had alot of imagery, the title didn't really give any ideas to what is was about, the image i got from reading this was pain of some sort, that of a bad situation...great imagery used, voacb, flow..all dope...oNe