yo you know the rulz...........spit you got 20 mins

u on????
let do this
but my rules u fjkin crack head was u spit fukin first ..how many time i wana tell u or we spit sum wut in the same time period..
i dont like feeders an even if u promise not to feed i dont give a fuk
u down
10-15 lines
we both drop in 25 minutes if u take till an hour DQ

CHECK
mic 1 2
u ready to be merked.
IN................................................ ........uppin for dis fool to drop

ok checkin in and dropin............

im gonna merk this "herb" cuz to you my lyrics are "superb" bitch youve been handed a wins you dont "deserve" my shits unreal its soundin like it came from another "world" now you on my merkin list cuz bitch youve just bein "served"/
im spitin "devine" this fuckin kid must be outa his "mind" make this kid read it over like hes pressin "rewind"/
my lyrics are "devastatin" so strong rippin through mcs like they armor "penatratin" and bitch im my rhymes are as vicious as "satan"/
you notin but a dick rydah and a "hata"(hater) bitch ive served so many people youd think i was a "waiter"/
ill knock your teeth out just so you cant bite my "rhymes" you gotta stop dwellin on your wins these are new "times"/
battlin me is the only thing youve eva done "insane" im dropin these clips leave you in a daze full of "pain" leave you wit a perment blood "stain"/
these bitchs must all wonna get "eliminated" leave you outa rhymes lyricly "disinagrated" cuz bitch im so hot if i spit close to the pacific the whole ocean would get "evaporated" you thought youd win but i geuss you "misscalculated"/

yo common.........................hurry.............. .................................................

Dope Flow by Fatal... its gonna be good to see the comeback of Game Insane... but that was alright...

Peace
Big D........

if he even shows up................................................ .................................................

HAHA True...... IF he shows up... i think he will..................

Big D.............................

he betta im givin him an hour from now......that kid called me out...made rulz that if in an hour it wasnt droped youd get a DQ then takes off so he betta spit quick or hes gettin the dq

aite my bad dawg i have a virus or had a virus on my cvomp now its gone..it made me shit down half way thru..
so give me 25 minutes..ill drop even sooner...layte\

I ALWAYZ SHOW

AIte coo verse..nuthin speacail...im gunna have to try..this time

yo

Battlyn me is Insane,Naw dats just played,uzin da same lines ya heard from ya pears//
Left the other 2 victims of mine,u the third,think bout a new career//
Dis Herbs strate bammer,i wudnt waist my time rollin-u-up//
KNock ya down like hammer,got u wishin i didnt show-up//
Ill hit this net thug so hard hell drop dead cold in his dads office chair//
Sendin head slugs to ya dome, cuz My illness cant be compaired//
KId ya LYRics are fatal< I doubt they just unstable like a 3 legged table//
Ya crew cudnt contend to my skills, when my lyrics are enableD//
Damn be foreal kid, im spittin rappad lyrical shells injectin u to da fullest//
Im LYrically strapped bitch, an when im paked wit da steal u start sweatin bullets//
U proly sum hik white boy walkin around wit a mullet , on his head//
Inbead u wit a loss till u drop,an think about a new hobby instead//

wuick but full of heat..
pc uppin

damn game took this 2 me, killerrrrrrrrr flow, damn game just merked u, fatal no hate, u got skill, mad props homie

poll vote- game

this wasn't dope.

BREAKDOWN:

Multi:Fatal
Vocab:Fatal
Wordplay:Game
Punches: Game

Overall: Game

Dis was so close...cause it was so whack...game..you got it...

__________________

I Speak Out
Battles
Pink Slips 007 Pt. 2

^^uppin eh one of u didnt poll ittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt ttttttttttttttttttt
AN U BOTH R ON

Sorry i cant vote but ill hit this up with feedback

flow=game
punches=nither realy but game
lol nobody realy had anythin so i dont know just forget the rest

Game u had sum good punches and nice flow, so u take this one.
Work on ur punches tho, try to cum up wit better ones, make similier and metas too along wit more multi's, cuz u got skill

fav line

KId ya LYRics are fatal< I doubt they just unstable like a 3 legged table//

Fatal your verse was pretty basic, and ur flow? run on sentences like crazy, where are the comas?

keep elivatin dog u got potential

can ya'll hit this up with a vote in return for this feedback, thanks

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