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Old 08-13-03, 06:42 PM   #1
THE DALABIL
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Liquid Lounging

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I'm lounging and my lifestyle is "unique"
its unexplainable when we "speak"
you search the stars...I watch my "feet"
you go out and hit the bars...I'm dropping bars with my "peep"

To whom you "seek" is to whom you "meet"
and to whom your...

"actions around"
brought "fractions around"
"subtracting around"
gotcho click and "yo'town" ducking and "bowing down"

AND IT AINT EVEN TO THE CROWN!!

Oh but you's a grown man now?

You got bigger "issues"?
Starring for answers watching that nigger "news"?
Who started this AND who lit that "fuse"?
The President, Prime Minister, Middle Easterns or "Jews"?

AND THEY LEAVING NO CLUES

Yet they gotchu as "not quite fools"

Get - "cho" - gen -
"bro" - ken -
"sto" - blend -
"grow" - mend -
"go" - "fo" - the "dough" -
end -
being the "low" -
end -
going "slow" -
end -
being the one to let the One "flow" -
end

I appreciate the words so...

Lets have'em!!

Hahahaha its all love

Bad...good...its all for THE cause

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Old 08-13-03, 07:47 PM   #2
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Larf. Yes, your first two piece on here have made me larf...but in a serious kind of way. i.e they weren't just humourous full stop. They had a dark humour to them. But also a light one too.

You went at the subject matter like a 'muhfuker'. Really grounded yet quite high. not sticking to any structure. Using expressionism on the edge coming with a raw and at times hardcore approach. At times it went off. But overall, i followed it well and true.

...much appreciated this piece. I like your 'style' (styleS), man..

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