Ever since i was 11, ive tried to be,
a tight MC, just so yall can confide in me,
i had big dreams, that only i could see,
write flows get rich wit a bride to be,

i thought school was a joke, fantasizin in class,
about ridin in a jag, and stackin my cash,
only thing on my mind was gettin paid ya see,
and i could CARE LESS about A's and B's,

when i was 14, i had a major change,
got braids instead of havin, the same ol fade,
got to high school and thought i had it made,
plus i did my homework and made good grades,

constantly kickin flows with every chance i got,
to increase the odds of whether id advance or not,
some people hate, and they glance alot,
but i dont care cuz ill keep strivin to enhance my plot,

then i moved to Cali, in 2002,
to accomplish all the things i was bound to do,
i needed a fresh start so profound and new,
cuz its hard to rap without someone clownin you,

my rhymes are all i got, i cant afford to lose it,
i use 'em to my advantage but dont abuse it,
im an MC not a rapper, so DONT confuse it,
i jus wanna touch the world by using music,

ive reached a new level never found in me,
to where rhymes are constantly surroundin me,
you wanna know why these ideas keep cloudin me?
its to IMPRESS all the people who doubted me,

im not tryna just appeal to an apparent crowd,
i want the world to buy my CD, and blare it loud,
i started in '97 and from there i vowed,
to keep it real on the mic and make my parents proud!

LiL TeX.....puttin it down from Texas to LA...gimme some feedback and lemme know wassup!!!!! NOMTOMBOUT....erebody gosta feel this country boy

that's not bad shit...try a bit more wordplay..

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I Speak Out
Battles
Pink Slips 007 Pt. 2

Your flow vocab and wordplay are very basic most of the time. You showed glimpses of some dope talent but you do need to elevate a little. Overall I enjoyed the piece but some of your mechanics are a little elementary.

For example-Ever since i was 11, ive tried to be,
a tight MC, just so yall can confide in me,
i had big dreams, that only i could see,
write flows get rich wit a bride to be,-your linking words are be, me,see,be really really basic step it up a little and it'll be tight.

I really liked this verse because it showed us a glimpse of your future if you keep at it--

constantly kickin flows with every chance i got,
to increase the odds of whether id advance or not,
some people hate, and they glance alot,
but i dont care cuz ill keep strivin to enhance my plot

A little more complex with a couple of multi's. Good drop and keep elevating I think you just might "touch the world with music."

good lookin out

i wuz feelin it az a whole but da rhyme wuz basic, step up ya vocab and you will b straight....one