20 lines max
ill set it up u spit first
no crew
hate
dr
or swayin votes

uppin fo him to see thi thread
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alrite listen,

this guy doin so much dick ridin hes shittin spunk/
wen hes fellow monks ask-top or bottom- they don't mean bunk/
tha saint, deliverin verses past there sell by date/
i don't hate but i make expection wen beef on the plate/
the only time this guy doesn't stretch the bar is wen its his round/
neva gonna elevate so i don't gotta say keep ya feet-on-the-ground/
lukin in the eye of defeat? he can't luk away/
can't pleasure his bitch cos his dick "the needle in the hay"/
record 5-9! switch it around n theres your career/
ur lifes ambition is 2 live in fear n this is no different so nxt time steer clear!

Leave you like a 'trapezist', but the 'NET'S~UNSTABLE, 'rip ya spine' so the this 'VETS~UNABLE'//
Sorry to 'WRECK~YA~FABLE, but 'soundclick' ain't a 'RECORD~LABEL'//
Get BATTERED~AND~BRUISED, pussy gets left SHATTERED~AND~LOOSE//
Could be a rhymin 'Oprah', but my game's still 'PHATTER~THAN~YOU'//
Lyrics 'poke you in the optic', see there is always more than what 'MEETS~THE~EYE'//
'DEFEATS~IN~LINE', you'd think my "fists were faggots" the way they 'BEAT~THIS~GUY//
How you claim to have the "backbone" to fight me when i'm 'CLUTCHIN~YA~SPINE'//
Ya "stubborn ass", put a "slug to ya dome", see...he does have an "OPEN~MIND"//
I SPOKE~IN~TIME, leave ya ass "speechless" like i was 'CHOKIN~MIMES'//
With TOKEN~LINES, i'll leave you like an "abused Teddy Rexpen", spittin 'BROKEN~RHYMES//
I attack with DRAWN~PISTOLS, 'military minded' and shoot off SPAWNED~'MISSILES'//
Bust bullets and leave ya BOD~FISSILE, and so many 'holes in ya neck', ya 'YAWN~WHISTLES'//
My mentality surpasses CATACLYSMIC, your verse is like 'glass feces' the way i SHATTER~HIS~SHIT//
BLADDER~GETS~SLIT, got you 'laughin' at your own verse and SCATTERED~WITH~'STITCHES'//
Like 'compressed myelitis', i CRUNCH~SPINES and leave you wit 'HUNCHED~RHYMES'//
My PUNCH~LINES got the score like '5-0', but you still got eatin like 'LUNCH~SWINE'//

i think The Sant got this one by far better wordplay multiez whatever but he got this


Vote---TheSaint


i dont know if my vote counts cuz i only have 3 Post

it dont think it count but thanks fo the input....................
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^Murder Most Horrid In Fact

lol thanks fo the vote dw u shoudnt have called me a bitch
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tha saint took this, dw that shit needs elevatin

"Lyrics 'poke you in the optic', see there is always more than what 'MEETS~THE~EYE'//
'DEFEATS~IN~LINE', you'd think my "fists were faggots" the way they 'BEAT~THIS~GUY// "

that's just one example of murkin on this

vote = saint

yo hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73429

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the saint got this, better flow and punches.

can yall hit this up with honest votes.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=73311

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...12&pagenumber=1

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uppin yall dont sleep on this___________________________
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i think that dw took this one. good wordplay and some nice punches........................................... ...................................

vote=dw

do y'all wanna peep my battle and return th effort, i'm getting slept on badly

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73228