Shit dawg , sorry bout the fuck up , Heres da real one.

Hold back -d- Atomic Sack of Chronic , I's got to merk Trav-O wid words so Ill - dey "Bubonic"
It's Ironic , How at 2-2 , dis Fool thinks he can hang with my Crew-N- still be friends "Plutonic"ally
I don't make friends with Flat-Out Losers , I'd wrather be in da company of Hoes and Boozers
TravO is an "Abuser" of English Slang , Prefers dicks over Pun-Tang , A Bad rythme User who hasn't yet came
Heard Trav is Im-pudent , In the school of Having sex with chicks , He's an "F" student
Den again , he's only Fore"teen" , and probably "Couldn't" tell da Kootchie from a "Spleen"
Last time he got "ass" , was from sitting onda cover of da Gayest of Magazines
I think its called "Sixteen" , Trav-O is a fucking Queen whos Talking Obscene bout setting up da Rules
Fuck bitch , you still couldn't win even if ur Dad was Principle of Rap School
Like a sample of Stool , you Flat Out Stink , and when Im done merking you ,"The END" might hand yu a Pink


10 lines bro ........... Peace ............and Good Luck

CrazyE

Yea...Umm...



I Have Niggaz~Tyte, Cuz My Complexity Dull~Out~MC’z, So they Ask Where~They’re~Ink~Went…
So they Pre~Write, CrazyE ~Pleads, As His~Skull~Bleedz, Can’t Be “Claiming Ill” when his “Flows~are~Delinquent”…(Definds Bad, and His Crew)
Your Loss~Is~Too~Late, Trav~Is~The~Great, Now You~Face~Fate…
Cuz “My Bars SHINE” like I am “DIDDY’S ARTIST” spitting on “Prison~Gates”…
This Young Scrapper~Rapper, Named Trav, who warns, I Got~Punches~For~Days…
Your Just a “Fear~Factor~Actor”, who~Performs Deep “Throat~Lunches~For~Gays”…
I Get Cruel and~Viscious~In~Ways, I’m~Schoolin~You~Today, Don’t Go 2 Work, I Rob Niggaz~When~Paid…
This battle Your Keystyles “Aint Fucking With Mines” like My “KeyBoard~Carries~AIDS”…
CrazyE Must~Be~A~Dummy, Read That “Yellow Book” How to “Rap and Battle~For~Dummies”…
Your Flow Is Really~Crummy, Cuz It Makes “No Sense” Like “Sequaling~The~Movie~Mummy”…(The Mummy Movies)

Trav won.. no need for explaination.. just every aspect

Vote . Trav
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Multis:
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Personals:
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Overall Winner:

trav-o, if you only 14...
you got sum skillz for a yougion...


your first line killed crazy's first half...in ma opinion...
crazy's flow, flowed but it seemed like he juss threw words in to ryme...


vote-trav-o

1-5
CRAZY

WOrdplay:1
Multis:2
Meta4:2
Personals:2
Punches:3


TRAV-O

WOrdplay:3
Multis:3
Meta4:4
Personals:3
Punches:4

Overall Winner:trav

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Kinda One Sided...

Punches:Trav
Personals:NonE
Complexity:Craz-e
Creativity:Trav
Flow:trav
Vocab:NonE That Was Really Enough 2 Win This Categorie
Mutlies:Trav
Wordplay:Trav, Hit Harder.
Overall Enjoyment:Trav, I Got Kinda Bored With Craz-E's...

Final Vote:Trav-O

nice verse...this kid trav-o kinda good...gotta break this down


Punches:Trav
Mutlies:Trav
Personals:neither
Complexity:Craz
Wordplay:Trav
Creativity:Trav
Flow:trav

Overall: Trav-o

WOrdplay:t
Multis:t
Meta4:t
Personals:t
Punches:t

Overall Winner:t=travo

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holla

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