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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
GridLockDaFelon 4 44.44%
Focus'd 5 55.56%
Voters: 9. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 08-16-03, 12:23 AM   #1
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Exclamation GridLockDaFelon Vs. Focus'd

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unlimited bars
no crew votes
come hard or dont come at all.....
 
Old 08-16-03, 12:33 AM   #2
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iight im checkin in..............................about to spit shortly if tha power at my place doesnt go out again before i get tha chance to iight so peep this when i do spit...........


peace
 
Old 08-16-03, 12:36 AM   #3
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I optically blind your mind to withstand the test of time/
spitting a perfect rhyme where metaphors are metafives/
Nobody leaves the stage alive, knockin teeth from your gums/
blazing up your eardrum with the moves from my tongue/
One breath from my lungs, followed by vicious rhymes/
lyrics so sharpe they fracture vertebrate and spines/
Nothing has as many lines, it's like a lyrical trilogy/
modern day sililoquoy that rips you metaphisically/
drop rockets destroyin ya optics, you cant see me like empty eye sockets//
hotter than hawaiin tropics you aint pikachu but i got you in my back pocket//
you unfit for conflict make the CRIPS foe drip, i got a grip on ya nuts bitch//
go head call me a faggot i handed you a dis but like skee-lo you can only wish//
chump, my skills like redwoods you cut shorter than tree stumps//
punch drunk 8 bars into round WON from a style sent to jenny craig for weighin a ton(phat)//
Felon your only refuge is bellview, nuthin can help you, ya shit stink like pepe la pu//
wu told you protect ya neck, you aint listen now these verbal twenty-twos CARREY like DREW//
lines tighter than miniskirt hems i drop gems and leave flowers for the dead//
combust heads, fill trunks with lead, you was hungry? well you gettin fed//
exposed to the ice cold, shit was OVER before this lethal DOSE//
top of the line like bose, rap pyro burn challengers with a kink in they hose(no flows)//
what type a caliber you expect? rap charity and im wack exempt//
redirect ya verse and save ya breath you cant test the text game It's over whos NEXT
 
Old 08-16-03, 01:22 AM   #4
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dont be fuckin wit my time iz u gonna drop or are you gonna let da battle get burried like 5 pages deep?
 
Old 08-16-03, 03:56 PM   #5
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imma be droppin shortly.............just got up right now and i be writing it fresh off tha top of my dome right now so just hold on iight................



peace
 
Old 08-16-03, 04:18 PM   #6
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Now prepare for my revelation as i demonstrate....tha omni-present reasons why steppin to me was ur sealin' tha envelope of ur fate//
I cant re-itterate tha expression i leave on ur face....destroy u into miniscule reminents N leave u in disgrace//
Taste tha blood leakin' from tha holes rivoted in ur body....N ur still frontin like ur tha one who shot me//
Ha, thats real funny, ur rhymes r like a stand-up comedy....they dont belong on this site, u shouldnt have even dropped them u see//
Im intelligent i got tha intellect N vocab to rap my way around text....eradicatin meak feeble inferior kats u dont have tha ability to fuck wit tha best//
Test me wit everything u got N everything u can positively muster....come on kid is that all ur capable of releasin' cuz like every otha fucka i'll use my words like a cleaver N cutter//
Slice u in half as even ur homies point N laugh....cuz just admit if this was a craft or race competition u would always come in last//
My disses deal out blow afta blow of unrelenquished terror N horror....N like a bad apple my intentions are rotten right down to tha core//
N no matter what I got all my shit in order....cuz unlike u who even wit GPS in ur hand u couldnt find tha state border//
Ur constantly searchin thru Webster's for explinations....to my spits which in contrast make urs seem worthless as i stay tha same while u become just anotha abbreviation//
Why am i honestly wastin time on a kat im evidently superior to....he could b a world class athlete N i would still lap him numerous times so what he gonna do//
Go N find more lyrics to bite or write mine down on paper....whatever he does he couldnt match me, not now, not in tha past N definitely not later//



fuck writin shit as soon as u get up wit a hangover is alot harder then i thought.....LMAO.......anyways there is my drop and nice spit Focus'd.......Nice format.....propz.......may tha best MC win...

peace
 
Old 08-16-03, 04:21 PM   #7
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uppin(1) for votes...........need poll votes on this battle iight so peep this and vote on it and drop a link and i will peep ur battle after u vote on this one and no fuckin freeposting iiight......so peace
 
Old 08-16-03, 05:10 PM   #8
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Lets go uppin.......................................holla at ya boy............................................... ..................
 
Old 08-16-03, 11:51 PM   #9
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damn iz there anyone on tonight dat can vote? i dont battle just cuz i like to type................................uppin!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 08-17-03, 12:21 AM   #10
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hit this up and i will vote here... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73606

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Old 08-17-03, 03:49 PM   #11
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uppin for some votes....................................lets go!!!!!!!!!!...................................... ..................
 
Old 08-17-03, 03:52 PM   #12
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dawgs, vote here.... it dont matter what i think of this battle cuz i cant vote neway

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=8%3D%3D%3D%3DD
 
Old 08-18-03, 01:21 AM   #13
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uppin(2) for votes......come on peeps lets get this going, get some poll votes here man.....



peace
 
Old 08-19-03, 11:31 AM   #14
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uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lets go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!................................ .........uppin!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 08-19-03, 12:22 PM   #15
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votes needed dont let dis one go to waste............................................. .................uppin!!!!!!!!!!!
 
 


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