Well... Another Week & Another No Show... Here Is My Verse Against Sand... Feed Back Is Appreciated

the Coast is Clear.. until Evolve appears & voting is reached
cause im Shore to Devour Sand.. just like an Erroding Beach
exploding w/ each Wave of Punches, only use Fists when i Greet
& i Stand when i Welcome, cause Sand is used to Defeat (lol.. i know)
Flooding the screen w/ heat, my Flow leaves this man tagged
& i DO give a DAMN about the win.. look how i got Sand Bagged
this fag aint got a chance.. he's in the Dark when the battle's out
Over Cast?.. nah, he's just Wack beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
put a Saddle on his mouth.. dude ride's more Dicks than Nixon
'Throw the Streamers'.. Metasin hit the Rhode, so tell me...
You Miss Him???
listen... he was a Homo & you ... well, let's let the guessing start
cause just like your Avy.. i bet Eva still wears a Question Mark ?
its like this dude Digested my Heart.. the way he Took a Beating
him Vs me is decieving, cause IM the only one here that's CompEating
Dishing this Weakling a loss w/ ease.. he just aint ready for my Plates
cause no one really likes Bars of Sand.. especially w/ Heavy Weights

the Coast is Clear.. until Evolve appears & voting is reached
cause im Shore to Devour Sand.. just like an Erroding Beach

^lol...dope.

exploding w/ each Wave of Punches, only use Fists when i Greet
& i Stand when i Welcome, cause Sand is used to Defeat

^its almost blasphemous to use defeat lines...

Flooding the screen w/ heat, my Flow leaves this man tagged
& i DO give a DAMN about the win.. look how i got Sand Bagged

^my goodness...dope.

this fag aint got a chance.. he's in the Dark when the battle's out
Over Cast?.. nah, he's just Wack beyond a Shadow of a Doubt


^lmao...more of the good stuff here..

put a Saddle on his mouth.. dude ride's more Dicks than Nixon
'Throw the Streamers'.. Metasin hit the Rhode, so tell me...
You Miss Him???


^eh...started off good but i feel this couldve been excuted a whole lot better. dont get me wrong it was good, just not typical "Evolve" material...


listen... he was a Homo & you ... well, let's let the guessing start
cause just like your Avy.. i bet Eva still wears a Question Mark ?


^nice personal..

its like this dude Digested my Heart.. the way he Took a Beating
him Vs me is decieving, cause IM the only one here that's CompEating

^no. the setup is played and the second line wasnt that good...your verse wouldve been better without this..


Dishing this Weakling a loss w/ ease.. he just aint ready for my Plates
cause no one really likes Bars of Sand.. especially w/ Heavy Weights

^didnt like the setup that much..but the second line was dope.


you showed why you are the LLL champion here... more A type material from you..

oh yeah, using "w/" is getting annoying..

Evolve that was very damn fucking good....
can I say..Dope...on point every line ,punches were Ill.....
The devour sand line was ver ygood..

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Thanks for the reply's... Peace

this was complex and on point..very creative man..i like to see that. keep takin more time than 50 cent does to write his rhymes, lmao (patiently waiitng) SHOUDNT THROW STONES IF U LIVE IN A GLASS HOUSE. U GOT A GLASs JAW U SHOULd WATcH UR MOUTH,,I'LL BREAK UR FACE lmao..keep goin man nice shit!

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i coulda swore i replied to this.


anyways....



i DO give a DAMN about the win.. look how i got Sand Bagged
damn, thats very iLL

Over Cast?.. nah, he's just Wack beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
damn man, thats fuckin beautiful

they were my favorite lines by far. overall this drop was fire, really feelin it to the fullest. ur structure and rhyme schemes are impressive. has a lil complexity to it whith the multiples and interlocking bars etc.



feelin it.



stay up

Appreciated