This single come’s with a dick-and a chick that’s nameless-
So if you don’t think it’ll blow your fucking brainless-
You aren’t thug wont battle and cant dance-
So give your producer head you already blew your chance-
To prove you sick with lines-
If you as ill as you claim then you ain’t fit to rhyme-
These cats full of shit and can’t spit it get a colon cleaning-
Sleep on me if you want cause seeing me you must be dreaming-
If you awake don’t diss….. What’s the use-? Call truce-
I’m iller then you…. with a group-
Of alcoholics getting drunk off my proof-
I doubt you understand but I hate the fans you foolen-
Even if they study my math-
Cant substitute me when it comes to schoolen-
help go platinum….. id still scream kiss my ass-
While you work like a mule for some jackass fool-
I rather get hits on free spits waite till I druel-
But when I do-it’s cause I resting on you-
10 out of 5 is fake-The only time I’ll stop napping is at your wake-
your styles broke snap your bone …I’ll rip you after the break-
if you want to flow wth me you can get your fill-
but I aint signed to collab im contracted to kill-
anyman can get touched this shit is real-
say what you want but you’ll never be me-
your shit is parental advisory I’m pg 33-
it aint clear how you here- to much distorion-im on track like theories of motion-
fuck your girl for 8 months on the 9th make her Hurl as proof of abortion


HOOK: it’s still NONCENTZ aint shit gonna change-
Im still here to fuck head and get brains-
Still the deranged-my metaphors still the same-
Im still to tight for lames-your pimp status for blame-
why use a quarter of thought this aint a game-

str8 fire.. this is one of the better rhymes I seen from you for a while dawg... good wordplay
"with a group-
Of alcoholics getting drunk off my proof-
I doubt you understand but I hate the fans you foolen-
Even if they study my math-"....

the proof line is what I'm talkin' about... I liked that... good shit fam... 1

PEEP MY OPEN MIC... "Multi's with depth"

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^^word to what bash said
wordplay was sick,

"You aren’t thug wont battle and cant dance-
So give your producer head you already blew your chance-"

^^thats sick

UPPN THNX

To prove you sick with lines-
If you as ill as you claim then you ain’t fit to rhyme-


The multi there's perfect..Flow's right on point..But this is the only part i seen with a correct multi...

On a more positive note..


m iller then you…. with a group-
Of alcoholics getting drunk off my proof

That could have been SO sick....I don't think many have noticed or will notice the meaning to that but ...Pretty nice..A member from cunninglynguists has an idea similar to this but yu flipped it totally different..


it aint clear how you here- to much distorion-im on track like theories of motion-
fuck your girl for 8 months on the 9th make her Hurl as proof of abortion


Motion/destortion..Doesn't rhyme..Abortion/motion..Doesn't rhyme..But the last line made my stomach turn a little lol..So aside from the stretchyness off the line and lack of rhyme it was a good ending..

Your chorus?..Man, i was expecting more o be honest..It seemed quite mainstream and simple..


I like your work when you display the complexity you're capable of..How about we work with each other on a collab?..

Real topic, no "I'm the best" self praise type shit..PM me if you'd like to take me up on that offer..

Stay up, 1ne..