aight yo,
10 lines
no d/r
no hate
no crew
no feeding
no biting
no pre-written
no ghost-write
2hr time limit

ima drop in a few

checkk in dawg

checkin in

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u ready to be merked

Here’s some advice//1
You betta run as if you were a “draftee” in tha “mili-taree”//2 (military)
Stay back kid, cuz you don’t want no beef with me//3
I’ll “fuck you up”, “cut you up”, and “pimp smack you up”//4
Cuz, dawg, you’re outta “luck”//4
Your name is Doctor J, what tha “fuck”?!//5
You think you Julius “Erving”//6
But to me, you’re just a another “serving”//7
You suck dick like a fat ass “plummer”//8
Don’t you wish roll wit a pimped out “Hummer”?//9
But instead, you roll wit a piece o’ shit in tha “summer”//10
I’ma pull out my gak and shoot you in tha face//11
Cuz dawg, you ain’t never ever gonna win this race//12

U Couldn't "Drop-Hot-Bars" Even If I Handed U "Soap-Inflamed",
U Think U Hard Even Though U And Ur Crew Spit Da Same... Extremely Lame//2

Ur 1-1...I'll Leave Ur Rap-Career-Done...Even-Before-It-Begun,
I'll Automatically Transform U Wit A Million Holes From My Lyrical Sub-Machine-Gun//4

Look At Dis Bitch He Didn't Even Counted,
His Verse More Elementary Then A,B,C blocks Mounted//6

Don't Fuck Wit Me Herb...I Can't Be Touched,
Unlike U I Never Went To A Catholic School Aimin To Get Butt-Fucked//8

U A Little Faggot That Always Ends Up "Verbally-Raped",
U Never Woke Up And Knew U Was Gettin Merked Manually Today//10

uppin 4 votes

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Good stuff Doctor J you merked this cat

If I could vote Doctor J you would have my
vote

One

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gotta go with doc on this one
he had better wordplay and some nice punces
tha other dude had no flo...very weak
doc will win this one with a TKO

VOTE DOC

thanx 4 votin

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nice drop doc J................................................. ....................................

thanx u wasn't bad yaself

uppin 4 sum votes

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I smell a biter
Line 4 from GCHand is bitin from Tupac Change

Dont let them Jack you up pimp smack you up

Anyways either from that this is how its broken down

Floe = Doc
Multi's = Doc
Creativity = Doc
Meta's = Doc
COmplexity = DOc
Vote = Doc

You have been merked man... anyways ggood luck next time...

Thanx 4 votin

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anybody can come up wit dem rhymes i don't think there bitten

even if they were it ain't nuttin big to get him banned over

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2-0 uppin

uppin 4 votes............................................. ................................






dont sleep yall..................... (1)

doctor got this

his verse was more complex, better rhyme form or structure, and good flow...hard punches

vote=doctor_j

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