Rules:
No more than 15 lines, no less than 10
No DR
No Crew
No Bitin
etc...
You spit 1st

The clocks tickin dogg!
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Aight I aint gonna set around and wait! Since this guy aint spittin I'ma have to put a timer on this 'cause I know he's online. You got 30 mins from the time I post this to show up! If not by then it's a DQ!

Sorry dogg I aint down with no shows!

shit sorry dogg.i had to run to the store befo it closed. ama spit right now.. i thought u spit first .. my bad//..
checkit,,,,,
this be my first spit here like a rookie in the N.B.A//
than messin u up wit my shookie or a fade-away//
throwin mad elbows cause u steppin in my space//
trust me you dont wont dis battle to be face-to-face//
your eyes are gonna hurt from the readin like am sprayin mase//
my rymes will change ur race ull be female mutt fo real//
I aint ur dogg, cause usa bitch and now its time fo you too heel//
take dis speal cause it was meant to be defined//
ya slow, dont understand take 50's adviced and press rewind//
bust a nine break a glot as i site back and watch u rote//
my drop is like a hiroshima and u the X that marks the spot//
howd i know this got u madder its a crazy blood splatter//
ur flow is thin blooded, and now tell me whos fatter//
u swear my flows had dirty prints cause they will steal-ur-rep//
zeeko's style is like a breakdancer u wont beat me wit just a two-step//
dats it

dogg learn how to use multi's. you never even put one in that whack shit! anyways here's my spit:

It's D-Fyne's time ta rhyme and shine without a 9,
Beat your whole crew x2 even with a broken spine/
Look at what i did to your mama's crib when I drove by,
I'm not gonna be happy until i meet this guy eye-to-eye/
I'm known to carry a heater right in my pant's pocket,
If I see you I'ma pull it out and in your face I'll cock it/
It's at the point you have less moves than a pivot joint,
You're a damn ice cube that reached it's melting point/
Your shit don't even belong here it aint a tight battle,
Your style and complexity have boundaries like farm cattle/
And what the fuck is up with that no meaning name?
Somethin so dope you thought it would claim your rise to fame(BUT IT'S LAME!)/
Damn there aint no more to be said why talk to the dead?
Your butter I'm bread and you're blood has been spread/

Aight help me merk this kid! Let's get some votes up in here.
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D-Fyne took this shit easy...Harder punches and Zeeko, that mase line shit is tha most played line EVER....And D-Fyne, that's not multies your spitting, it's just rhyme scheming....Multies is were two different syllables rhyme in each line but they all don't rhyme together like D-Fyne, see-mine....But anyways.....

Vote: D-Fyne cuz of better punches and rhyme scheming....

Oh yea.....return tha favor.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

Yo thanks for the vote Vison! By the way I never said I was gonna use multi's in my rap. The reason I said that to zeeko is because he's a newbie and I didn't know if he knew how to use them. I know what a multi is dogg! Anyways...

D-Fyne-1
Zeeko-0