you know the rules... Check in and spit dawg

Eliptical Era name says it all, you haven't strated straight,
Terminate this embryo(newb), livin a short life's embrassed/
Your laced with wackness but you can't tie this battle,
Left tripping n break-fast cuz you snap,crackle n pop-ya/
I haven't got ya, but i sure as hell beat ya played lines,
Never climb positively cuz another mc is minus wit mine /
You gotta spine? nah i break ya discs but you back-bone
Your dis's-only-connect when you disconnect the phone/
Never tracked home, cuz this chicken hasn't gotta clutch,
I kick Eliptical's ass, but potents fund kicking the crutch/

Think about the wordplay...

I take 15 mins....how long do you need...your a fuckin pre-writer..n you been browsin front lines all the time....

Lol no man I was just out for like 2 hours I'll spit in 15 min
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Bout to be 10-22, bitch can't even make it in a crew, wel its understandable, who would want you?//1
Your alway's cyphering, but its funny cause you don't got a clue, you try and get your "friend's vote", and still don't know what dick ryders ~do~//2

Fuckin "english" bitch, sayin you spit tight, and you got a "Big Ben", that wasn't what I heard when your mom's Stimpy, fucked up your Ren//3
Your rappin vs one of the "Crem de la crem", fuckin homo thats "french" not german "natzi leader", your "Hitler" has been hit worse then a man in glasses by ~Eminem~//4

Just about merked, underdog of R&B, I wouldn't in dem words', Under R&B and bite's like a dog, now that shit works'//5
Flow was shittier then a floater in a toilet of turds, punche's were worse then a fag's havein pillow fight's in the burb's, The pestcides have worked, now to pass it on to other ~herb's~//6

lol...i'm in t.i.c dog..uppin fo votes............................................. ....
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Well it aint in your sig meannin you aint worth a shit in the crew, and yea uppin
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Come on Don't sleep on diss shit, Uppin nigga's
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Oh and by the way I'm not a prewriter, and atleast most of my shit rhymed...
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vote-po



he took this easily with much better punchs that actually made sense

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Vote=Potent

It was pretty wack but it came through, keep elivatin the both of u

Potent can u hit htis up please in return for thiss thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=5&pagenumber=1

OK il braek down then exp.

Personals - Elipt
Punches - Elitp
Multi's - Tie
Medas - Pot1ent
Wordplay - Pot1ent

Pot1ent some of your shit was kinda plyed.. but i liked your structure n shit.. real cleva..... Elipt you started strong.. then that 3rd n 4th bar wa str8 up wack n nothin else.. finisher was aight

so i gota give it to pot1ent for Consistancy... close 1 tho

uppin............................................. ...........................................
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Personals - Elipt
Punches - Elitp
Multi's - Tie
Medas - Pot1ent
Wordplay - Pot1ent

Pot1ent some of your shit was kinda plyed.. but i liked your structure n shit.. real cleva..... Elipt you started strong.. then that 3rd n 4th bar wa str8 up wack n nothin else.. finisher was aight

so i gota give it to pot1ent for Consistancy... close 1 tho


^^^
decent...
breakdown...
yep...

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