My freestyle rhymes mesmorize time
Stop that shit straight on a dime
Flip around verses with or w/o any curses
Like a crack addict attack snatchin purses
Its worse when, my flows go deep
Get in ur head, fukkin u up in ur sleep
Im pshycosamatic, my rhymes illmatic
Flow melodramatic, fukk it im fanstastic
I leave you blasted, send chills down ur spine
I could leave ur jaw open after just one line
Come at me and ull lose ur mind
I'll go at ur bitch give her the bump N grind
Turn her around leave her pussy drippin
Fukk that bitch hard, all Nite pussy rippin
I leave cops scared cuz i'll bust my nine
I'll shoot a pig in the head, the rest say thats fine
No one fukks with this gansta, im ill and im sick
Go at any bitch, slap her with my 7 and 1/2 inch dick
Spit out at me and i'll knock u in ur face
Leavin u dead on the pavement wat a disgrace
So now u should know to not step to this kid
I'll bust u with my nines and knock u off this grid

damn...i waz feelin it dude. mixin in thoze big wordz...gott me a lil confuzed, butt itz all jesus.lol.i couldnt git shyt 2 kum out 2nite ill spit a few 2morro. Represent.....Children of tha mutha fucc'n corn. bytch itz lyke whoa.holla bacc killa

LC

Children of the Corn is born biatch

OMG...This was da sickest open mic ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...............Damn yo , this open mic was FIRE..........I like ur style.....Ur lyrics were
sick................SYKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!..............Dawg on the real note , this piece was Weak , Ur lyrics were simple , ur vocab usage was weak , u hardly had vocab in this piece...........All I gotta say is u have too Elevate......And u will get better...Overall I give this piece a 6.1/10

Shit dawg didn't need to be so harsh shit fukkin i can take critisism but dont be a dick bout it but thanx for advice i guess PEACE