A Brains A Power Full Thing

tough world...strong citys..2 things..that mean totaly diffrent
but what the meanings are...are the truth..the awnsers are hidden
hidden from eyes...cuz angers at heart..blacks n white all races togher
memorys remain..but lives are takin...souls are gone for places of better
abortions...miss carages...kids die..some lie...just to cover abuse
but whats inside..and inheld in ur hearts...is were u barry the truth
a minds powerfull...thoughts even more stong..but as 1 there lethal
just cuz the color of skins...not from act's..but it is this...that we are down graded as people
white..blacks..asians..it dosent matter..were hear on earth togher
just cuz ur high on life..dosent mean u aint under the weather
all this is cruppted from us...mind soul body n sprit
a brains a powerfull thing..so kids listen..n hear it


just a quick open mic keyyy what u all think....

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<center>Mike Albin</center><center>Oct 31,2003 Rest.In.Peace.Homie</center>

<center>Derek Raposa</center><center>Oct 31,2003 R.I.P.H</center><center>Your Both Missed Greatly..1 Luv</center>

that was a good keystyle...good wordplay an meaning...had a strong powerful outcome...i liked it 8/10

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hey man that was tyght