10 lines limited
checkin first then,
20 mins to drop

ill-emental drop ya verse............................................. ..................
.................................................. .....i ain't droppin for a no-show

fuck it...you can have allday...

Ill-Emental has typin dificulties...he meant to type el-emental,
Then it'd represent-ya skillz cuz battlin me is debt-to-ya-mental/
Make-ya pick ya brains maybe that's why you serve very little,
I'm stormin Emental in this battle while your reign jus to drizzles/
Even if you had brittle bones you couldn't hone art-to-write-with,
Your raps ignited your height, cuz it's a short flame that was lit/
You don't spit, you've common sense cuz that would kill-ya,
So ya write lyrcis be4-hand so ya have double the impact bars/
Is Ementals skillz hard? i can't say i gotta find some first,
Your last season*, Ghostwritin but can't dis-guise ina verses/

*Birthday May 27, 1985
Age 17.....if he was 17 he'd be in 2002

Sorry i didnt even see this, and naw i didnt pre-write so dont try and accuse me of it....not a bad newbie spit....better luck next time though...

Ima A 'Paper Chaser', Emcee With Razor Teeth To Gnaw-Ya-Verse-'Dud',
Ill Give You 'Blank Paper' To 'Picture Your Death' When You Draw-Tha-First-Blood!'/
Im About To 'Bring Death To You', Man Your Hearse-Is-On-Retail!,
This Guy Loves My Cock, Coz He's Searching For My Personal-Details!!'/
Ill On Instrumentals, But You Aint Shit Dawg You Aint Rippin-Emental!,
I'm Snapping Your 'Plaques' With Punches, So Im 'Splittin-Ya-Dentals!'/
This 'Homo' Is An Ugly Bitch, So Yall Know Im 'Rippin-Him-Last',
Shove My 'Bootz' Through His 'Anus' So Im 'Kickin-His-Ass!!'/
Watch As This Foe-Gets-Rattled, You Ill? Hoe-Lets-Battle!'
This Fagget Couldnt Have 'Wordplay' If He Was A 'Pro-At-Scrabble!!'/

Haha, you aint shit dawg.....peeping my details..lol u aint got shit on me......

anyway uppin for votes.....

My vote don't matter but that was really good on Ill-Emental's part. Ova nigga came to just practice his typing skills..to get personal you watch a nigga moves, not look at his profile. Holla.

Yo this is how i seen it


Flow Ill
structure Ill
punches both
Origonality ill
well rounded battle on ill's behalg

Vote Ill
Peace

thanks, uppin..........number..............1.............. ..............................................

Vote-Ill-Emental

Reason-the first verse shows signs of needed elevation, no doubt about it. Ill-Emental, you threw down a good verse, I like your opener too,. This was a one-sided battle, but bootz, just elevate homie.

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Only God can judge me, Who THE FUCK IS YOU?!

hmmm this was an obvious battle...

flo-ill
punches-ill
wordplay-ill
vocab-ill
overall-ill

vote-ill

thanks for the votes......2.....more....and...its.....over
uppin....number.....2............................. ........................

DAMN ILL you good playa...nice drop.....umm what i need to say has been said...Bootz just challenged a better emcee

vote ILL

thanks bro, uppz for some poll votes......................................
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Uppin NuMber 3 ..................votes please..........
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flow-ill
structure-ill
punches-both
overall-ill

no hate.............................................. .........................

aiight thanks for the vote, just need one more to finish this shit, uppz.............................................. ..........