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08-24-03, 10:51 PM
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Evolve (0-1) vs. Fgee (1-0)
IP:
Check In: Tuesday.
Verses: Thursday. Alright, The Rules... 16-48 Line Limit... No Bullshit... Topic: Off My Chest |
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08-25-03, 01:55 PM
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check in...
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08-26-03, 09:17 AM
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OriginIll
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Hopefully, this won't get slept on like my last SS battle................. |
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08-28-03, 04:33 PM
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fragments of light cascade across my sight
shades of black and white invade the night its a fight just to stay awake and write eyes are focused tight, glued to the screen words are formed thru letters being teamed sounds and sylobols come together clean the flow picks up steam, verse takes shape verbs are placed into their fitted case each space represents time to think smash thru mental blocks confining the links every setence's connection uniquely distinct till fatigue sets in, sleep is on the brink attention span shirnks, hard to piece the puzzle eyes are in trouble as tiredness doubles time expires, each second collected is subtle thoughts once so loud.. are now distorted and muffled my mind wonders as my eye lids slowly close got to finish this piece.. so i'll only doze next thing you know its morning & the computer froze my mirror exposed.. sleep marks and keyboard imprints never write sleep deprived, just save and print it prose didnt survive, never should’ve tried to finish it now those images become unlimited ports of stress mad at myself for coming up short in text all because I tried to force the thoughts off my chest |
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08-28-03, 08:41 PM
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evolve i been busy as fuck
heres something quik but if its alright ill drop a proper one 2moro? an extraordinary woman going about a simple life pure and concise moralistic without a vice positively light radiating radiations glow million dollar smile to show white as snow skin without a fold perfect in everyway exposed skin naked and on display she had it made money for revelations made the camera patient loving the lens facial posing in labels ass tits and navel on view assets to woo larger than life but needed new implanted with a bruise x-rays reveal a flaw it rocked her to the core cancerous pores in scores they inhabited cells the silent killers she'd concealed hers now fate delivered sealer a woman beater this poison had grabbed her breast during operations test she got something off her chest |
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08-28-03, 10:22 PM
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*Reads Rules*
Verse By Thursday... ------------------------- No Exceptions... -===========- |
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08-28-03, 11:37 PM
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RB's Grandpa.!
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Uh, Im Not Sure If I Have To Break This Down. Evolve Won This For Obvious Reasons, Such As, More Effort. I Thought This Was Gonna Be A Descent Battle But Im Fooled. Vote Evolve.
He Had A Descent Concept And Good Flow And Kept My Intrest. Blah |
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08-29-03, 02:30 AM
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Evolves time and effort really showed compared to Fgee's. not that Fgee had a bad verse cuz it was good for a keyed one but the concept and presentation was not as good as Evolves
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08-29-03, 10:21 AM
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OriginIll
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08-29-03, 11:38 AM
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Jee-You Knit?
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I truly did like fgee's, just wanna say that. But Evolve, yours just clicked with me, we have all been there. Their is nothing else to say, fgee, great verse, nice lil flip, but it look like evolve was making flapjacks.
Vote-Evolve Please check out my battle, even if they both no show, and give some response.
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08-29-03, 02:36 PM
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ok respect that
at least ur cracking down on late verses.... good drop evolve...ur lucky i only had 10 minutes to spare  |
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08-29-03, 03:03 PM
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OriginIll
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LOL.. my drop only took me 10 minutes too........................
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08-29-03, 03:30 PM
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Straight Savage.
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Good pieces to both of you. Though it took you basically no time to do your pieces, i have to give this to Evolve for an overall better drop. Not saying that i didn't like Fgees but Evolve's came out alot better.
Vote-Evolve
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08-29-03, 07:37 PM
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IP:
I Also Agree That Evolve Won This For Better Verse Content..
And A Much Better Thought Out Verse, No Disrespect To Fgee.. But , As He Said.. Rushed... Didnt Feel Any Emotion Put Into It.. Vote: Evolve Good Battle Guys... Next Week You Will Both Be At (1-1) |
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