10-15 Lines
No Crew, Hate, D/R Votes.
No Feeding.
No Editing.
No Bitting.
You Are Dropping First. Good Luck.

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yea...

Look hea playa....

This boy name killa will hurt u
ill put a shell in ya bacc like u was a ninja turtle//
my hood is more colder that ice rinkz
only hot punches he droppin is un iced drinkz//
imma og but im not bobby johnson
ill buss ya head and snap yo neck as if i was charles brunson//
i murder niggaz lyrically and physically for fun
i said i got a chyna white he said "aint that that bitch that rap wit lil jon?"//
ill can smash on u rather if itz tha mic or text
im not bill goldberg but im still hollin WHO'Z NEXT?//

Wow That Was Really Good, I Might Not Be Able To Beat It:

Contagiusly, Courgaiously, Tearing You Limb From Limb Symaltaniously/
Your Getting Your Ass Handed To You By a Veteran In The Makeing/
I'm Busting Lyrical Veins So Much It's Got You Quaking/
You Coulden't Spit Good Shit If That Was Adjusted By Chrit/
When I'm Done With This Rhyme You Be Screaming, "Tight"/
You Aint Got A Pulse And You Are Starting To Shake/
Got You "Spitting Up" Weak Rhymes, You "Regurgitate"/
Why Are You Even Trying To Defeat Me/
Me Verbal Assault Has Put You Beneath Me/
Strike You Down With The 1, 2 Punch/
When I Ask For A Rematch You Will Hang A Sign In Your Sig, "Out To Lunch."/
Look At This Noob He Aint Even Useing All Of His Lines/
Don't Matter To Me, Your Wandering Deeper Into Mu Lyrical Land Mines/
Your Were Finished Before This Battle Even Started/
Compared To My Spits Yur Rhymes Look Retarded/

Just Smething Little, I Am A Bit Tiered. Lets See What The People Think.

Uppin For Some Votes. This Is My Frist Uppin And By What I Have Read You Can Only Have 5 Of Them. So People Please Vote And Don't Make Me Use Them Up.

uppin....for votes holla atcha yo boyz. nice flow deadly good luck. no hatin either. just vote other commentz could be kept to yall selves

Come On People Lets Get This Voteing Started. I Mean We May Be Noobs But That Is No Reason To Sleep On Our Shit.

This Is Not An Uppin But A Queation. Why Doesent Anyoen Vote On Noob Battles? I Mean I Undrestand I Can't Poll Vote Yet But That Doesentt Matter. So Why Don't You Guys Vote On Noob Battles?

Yo,,,,,,,,,,,,,, it goes like this..................

Wordplay D S
vocab DS
complexity DS
punches DS

fuck it NUFF SAID....................


vote DS

exactly...

hit this up plz!!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3576#post723576

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Thanks For The Vote. I Was Pretty Mad About My Structure. It Sort Of Took Away The Whole Flow Of My Spit. I Got The Vote Anyways, So Thanks.

Yeah i think DS took this one also, good battle though very close, but DS had the better punches and i felt his flow more...my votes goes to DS

Thanks For The Vote Dude, Well My First Battle And I Am Actually Winning For Once. Well Lets Get Some More Votes In Here Please.

This Is My 3rd Up For Votes. Don't Sleep On Battles Just Because The People In It Are Noobs. That Is Pretty Bad, So Come On And Get Some Votes.

Deadly Silence took this one...his verse was stronger even tho he fell off towards the end.

vote-deadly silence

Ds tok it..................he hit harder.......thats all i could C................................................. .................................................. ...........