rules 10 lines max
usual voting rules, under 300 posts? dont vote.
no feeding recycling or ne dat shit
20 mins from check in to spit
checkin spit

YO you post in here, after all it has ur name on it, u have been viewing the fuckin wrong thread for like 30 mins, doesnt even say ur name..............so whateva u do.....read this.........check the fuck in and post in this thread...............

checkin in

warm up

yo, im gonna make this nigga a ckoke artist, cause im gonna give him a third dagree burn like an arsanist,

merkin time

im burnin, and rippin, and shittin, on everything he spitten, cause he's still learnin, so im gonna leave this nigga wit a burdin,

cause my shits to complex, fo meks, i can neva run out of sets, cause i keepin servin like im rightin checks, and this battles gonna be to tough like a fat bitch tryin to position her self for sex,

but if ya down a couple beers you can make everything look attractin, well i down 5 cases and shit still looks like shit, i must not had drank enough cause it aint reactin, so its time fo me to take action, ya not even gonna budge ya voten poll not even a fraction,

so this new b just set you up for da smuggle, ya couldnt pop ya self out a this cause use in double trouble( ya get it the board game) uh oh ya just got fuckin hustled

aight nigga holla ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

iiight good shit, my bad about tha confusion, im blazed as shit.........im'a drop in'a min.............
check in

yo

======Toy-in With This Wak Kid========

Okay look at ya lines and tha stretch marks dat they ripped sport/1
Looks like U been Merked a few Times So Im'a Let'you Starve for Lift-Support/2
You "thirstin" to elevate but you're only drinkin Air/3
U Dis-persin Fake personals nothin great, ya punches aint even Wrinklin ma Hair/4
Cursed cuz u celebrate early then u left lonely Blinkin n scared/5
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It's Over
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I'll dis-rupt your mind, sendin schock-waves on ya pc screen like'ya played lines/6
You couldn't wrap workin at'a Gift shop for Sears, wouldn't mack jerkin'a Lift on'a truck won't shift top gears/7

Your paragraph got more commas then a persuasive essay you bedriddin roach/8
Lookin Like'a Taliban well i got da Bombaz to erase your say like editin ya post/9

So fuck wat u brought ta tha table! Lemme teach ur ass rap like'a fable, call me greek and i'll smash ur plate, u could read tha books or buy it own tape/10
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peace

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uppin holla ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

yo come on peeps we need some votes aight niggas holla ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

uppin holla ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

come on nigga please vote io vote on every body elses battles but niggas cant do da same here now dats some bull shit right there

yea dis battle slept on a lil today/................uppn for sum vote.s.............................drop a link we'll peep ur battle
Honest votes.

Yo here is how it be......

Flow Both although i wish Mc would break his bars up
structure Meks
punches Meks
personals.. none really
meti's Mc
multi's Meks
vocab Meks

Vote Meks

Yo drop a honest one here


http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=76197

It's Over
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I'll dis-rupt your mind, sendin schock-waves on ya pc screen like'ya played lines/6
You couldn't wrap workin at'a Gift shop for Sears, wouldn't mack jerkin'a Lift on'a truck won't shift top gears/7

Your paragraph got more commas then a persuasive essay you bedriddin roach/8
Lookin Like'a Taliban well i got da Bombaz to erase your say like editin ya post/9

So fuck wat u brought ta tha table! Lemme teach ur ass rap like'a fable, call me greek and i'll smash ur plate, u could read tha books or buy it own tape/10
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those lines made the decision easier
vote meks for harder punches.

wasnt feeling mc's line
cause my shits to complex, fo meks, i can neva run out of sets, cause i keepin servin like im rightin checks, and this battles gonna be to tough like a fat bitch tryin to position her self for sex,

but if ya down a couple beers you can make everything look attractin, well i down 5 cases and shit still looks like shit, i must not had drank enough cause it aint reactin, so its time fo me to take action, ya not even gonna budge ya voten poll not even a fraction,

^word, meks in all categories, esp. structure and wordplay