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Old 08-27-03, 11:21 PM   #1
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Arrow Just started flowin (((((((((((((((((())))))))))))))))))

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Many people deal wit their livin in poverty, and blessed be anyone
who has to deal wit not eatin for weeks
I can't imagine what it be like livin on the streets
Alls I know is what I see, I can see it's not easy to be
The one that everybody laugh at when they walkin by
No one to feel em when they feelin like they wanna die
No one to stop em when they about to commit suicide
No doctors, physicians, will give em there recognition, they need
some medical treatment but no one there wants to listen
Just think a all a their families livin out there in the streets featin with em
I don't' see no one who acknowledges there helpless existence
The little kids they got no place to call home
No where to go so in the ally's they roamin ALONE
And when they hurtin in the night by the side a the road
You'll hear the sound of their whimperin mouths as they moan
I didn't ask for this so why am I forced dealin wit it maybe I'm cursed wit it for somethin mommy or daddy did
Shit
Isn't it a shame that we don't pay more attention to whats been goin on in our so called
Political Intervention
When all they doin is penny pinchin, bitchin that theres no HMO, prescription assistance
Resistance in a foreign land, LETS SICK OUR KIDS ON EM




.................... Shit I got distracted..........
.................Ill finish this bitch though............
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Old 08-28-03, 12:00 AM   #2
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so far i like it... ill edit this spot when your done dropping... send me a PM to let me know u finished

good job so far
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Old 08-28-03, 12:03 AM   #3
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Yo check out some my otha shit I just got on Rb a couple a days ago and wanted to know if I was gettin any better...........

Thanx
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Old 08-28-03, 02:54 AM   #4
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uppin.............
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Old 08-28-03, 07:31 PM   #5
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Uppin...............................
Don't nobody check this shit out?
Peace............
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Old 08-29-03, 10:05 PM   #6
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I finnished it finally. I hope everyone can appreciate this one......................




Many people deal wit their livin in poverty, and blessed be anyone
who has to deal wit not eatin for weeks
I can't imagine what it be like livin on the streets
Alls I know is what I see, I can see it's not easy to be
The one that everybody laugh at when they walkin by
No one to feel em when they feelin like they wanna die
No one to stop em when they about to commit suicide
No doctors, physicians, will give em there recognition, they need
some medical treatment but no one there wants to listen
Just think a all a their families livin out there in the streets featin with em
I dont' see no one who acknowledges there helpless existence
The little kids they got no place to call home
No where to go so in the ally's they roamin ALONE
And when they hurtin in the night by the side a the road
You'll hear the sound of their whimperin mouths as they moan
I didn't ask for this so why am I forced dealin wit it maybe I'm cursed wit it for somethin mommy or daddy did
Shit
Isn't it a shame that we don't pay more attention to whats been goin on in our so called
Political Intervention
When all they doin is penny pinchin, bitchin that theres no HMO, prescription assistance
Resistance in a foreign land, LETS SICK OUR KIDS ON EM
I never got it and I don't think that I ever will
The government wont helpem even if there deathly ill
They try to tell em that they're doin everything but still

"THEY SIT BACK ON THERE BIG FAT ASSES AND SPEND THE TAX PAYERS MONEY ON STRIP CLUBS AND PROSTITUTES"





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Old 08-29-03, 11:00 PM   #7
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you got SoMe ill lines but it needs a lill work
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Old 09-01-03, 09:57 PM   #8
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Still elevatin........... but thanks




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Old 09-03-03, 03:33 AM   #9
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Uppin for some more feed................

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Old 09-03-03, 03:38 AM   #10
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yeah...this was aiiight...had some nice linez but the flow and multiez were a little lacking...keep elevatin' though...you got potential...BTW can you peep my 3 latest Open Mics??????
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