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Old 08-28-03, 09:08 AM   #1
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Ill Legitimate Suns - "Who Is I? (Damn)" (Album Track)

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Destination wanted me to post this track, so here it is. I'm not really feeling it much. Its not the final mix so excuse if the levels and shit aint right...

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=535635&q=Lo

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=535635&q=Hi

http://www.soundclick.com/util/Down...g.cfm?ID=535635

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Old 08-28-03, 10:18 AM   #2
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this was type good...beat was tyte for your rhyme and for what you were sayin lyrical wise...your delivery was pretty good....i like your type of style....its like you vibing with the beat and just flowing as the beat goes along...second guy was alright, wasn't all dat, but he had sum good lines here and there.....the hook was kinda good.....yea i think you should mix this down and just make a few adjustments and you good.....stay up dawg....OnE






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Old 08-29-03, 04:25 AM   #3
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Jeah!...More Illness Mun...Likin This Shit For Sure Uh...Flow Is Fucken Ill...Delivery Is On Point...Lyrics Are Up There Again Fo Sho...Quality Is Still Pretty Good.....Des's Verse Is Pretty Dope Too haha...You Should Mix This For Sure And Get It To Top Shape....Keep Droppin The Illness...Pz...
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Old 08-29-03, 05:13 PM   #4
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Thanks for the replies :-)
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Old 08-30-03, 08:40 PM   #5
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feelin the beat...

1st cat...son rode the beat nicely...

hook is good...

2nd...wasn't as nice with it...but did his thing...

this was a dope track...

ya delivery and whatnot made the beat that much better...

keep it up...
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