Convo- Cmon Please baby, After All Those Things You Said, How Can You Break These Promises?

-I just need my Space, Ya Know? I love you though....

- How can you Love me, When u dont even wanna be Wit Me...

**This Is Hard Maynnee**


You Only A Year Older Than Me And You Want Maturity(What?)
I Got More Than That, But Its Like You Never Feelin Me
You Gotta Believe In What We Have, Dont Give Up
I've Spent So Many Nights Wit Ya, And Still Givin Up
I Mean, What The Fuck? You Made So Many Promises
And You Still Seem To Come Hard When It Comes To Softness
Well Feel This, Ya Dont Want Me? Then Just Back Off
Cuz This Love Shit, We Had It, But Im Wipin It Wit My Cloth
I Aint Gonna Be Soft, Cuz Its Just A Game, And Its My Board
I Aint Playin Wit Peices, I Prayed So Much, But No More Lord
Its Time To Pull The Cord, Keep Those Memories, Layin Down My Sword(Its Yo Choice)

Chorus:
I Gave You My Whole Heart
Treasure It? No Tear It Apart
This Is Nothing More Than A Dream
We Had It, We Coulda Been A Team....

I Leave For 8 Days And You Break Everything Between Us(Whatever)
Plus, We Were So Happy, But Now U Sayin This Is Enough?(Bitch)
Damn, Dont Bluff, I Know You Gonna Want Me Back Soon
But This Time, Im Sayin No, Send Yo Ass Back In Gloom
Our Love Was To Bloom, But You Just Picked It Apart
You Just Pushin Things To Far, Time To Jump Outta The Cart
Keep My Heart, Forever, It Is Yours, Im Taking No More Chances
I Never Cheated Or Anything, My Friends Never Caught My Glances
Its Yo Choice, I Dont Care, I'll Give You Only My Personal Respect
But Smiles, Laughter, Care, Nah None Of Those, Just Forget The Rest...

Chorus
I Gave You My Whole Heart
Treasure It? No Tear It Apart
This Is Nothing More Than A Dream
We Had It, We Coulda Been A Team....


- Fine....Take This.....Just Dont Expect A Warm Welcome Back

**Door Slams**

Whatever....

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This Fo Real Too

Uppin fo replies

I felt that shit man,
i know the feelin...
every line was tight, the bracket echo effect was sweet
i liked it, nice flow, wordplay, vocab, everything
keep droppin

Thank you.....


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Great heart spiller...

Sorry things are like that for ya.

I loved the chorus you threw in.

Very tight.

Been trying to come up with some shit myself that has a chorus.

Nice inspiration, Slik.

Peace

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