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Old 08-29-03, 06:09 PM   #1
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Beefin wit Me

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beefin wit a sylabble ill killer wit a thrill 2 kill/
u gotta be a retard-to fuck wit a nigga who gets real hard/
fuckin im still thinkin trojan is a football team/
it might seem i dun get pussy-i get it so much its loose-i sleep in it/
i dreep in it-i peep in it/ima fuckin sick person in the head/
who would think cappin a nigga wit lead in dis thread was good?/
obviously all u-hhahahahahaha this is almost thru/
in about 20 minutes-im switch it-from sick to ill/
from evil to canvievl/to weed to coke-from cough to choke/
just think-dun blink mother fucka/
u a lucka u mucka dun pucka me-fuckin homophobic faggot/
laggot-maggot-haggot-handle it-dismantle it/
i can go on forver but im tired-and ive desired the thrill for blood on the shirt/
on a side note ill kill any fuckin crossdresser wit a skirt/
stick the machetti-cut dis nigga into confetti-ur life is heavy on my shoulders/

fuck u starin at-u wnna get yo ass layed flat?/
my shit is phat-pussy/yo shit whack-go pop some pills wussy/
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Old 08-29-03, 08:06 PM   #2
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From: Tha heart of tha devil
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it was confusin i give u that so i tried to read it slow but that took away from tha overall flow, plus tha way it was all arranged made readin it hard and finding any rhyme scheme even harder, if anything would help, maybe organizing it will, or better yet put ur rhymes at tha ends of tha lines so we know where any pauses or shit is
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