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Old 08-30-03, 04:41 AM   #1
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Loosin' My Mind

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I'm just writin to express all my depression and stress
Cause it's the only way to keep me sain in lifes little test
Of emotions and notions hopin all my gloatin will rest
It's the best I can do, cause it's all I have left
Trapped inside of a mind I never tried to unwind
Like a fine wine that has never aged wit time
But it's mine to decide whether I should live or die
My head is gonna explode wit all the anger inside
Feelings of disbelief, between the panic and grief
I don't know if I will ever come to terms with these things
Obscurity is something I don't want me to be
But I'm certain the curtain, will fall on top of me
I'm afraid I may stray to a far away place and get lost in the gray of what I am today
Still I pray that I stay close to home till the day that I find my own way and not loose to this game
I'm feeling pressure to go on and so on and so on
I'll never come together till I close what I wrote on
For right now I'll hold on to what I've been learning for so long
Until the time I die and leave this world that I've grown on




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Old 08-31-03, 12:38 AM   #2
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thats some nice shit, u got my props man, u ripped that shit...keep that shit goin. good job
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Old 08-31-03, 12:56 AM   #3
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hey im reppin pa to. anyway thats was some good ass shit. i cant wait to hear mo from u in the future
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Old 09-01-03, 09:54 PM   #4
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Thanks for the feed...


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Old 09-09-03, 03:43 AM   #5
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UPPIN...............


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Old 09-09-03, 12:51 PM   #6
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nice lil nig... nice... keep taht shit goin
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Old 09-09-03, 01:14 PM   #7
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Yo Im new to the Board and That was some Nice Flowin It come together real nice
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Old 09-09-03, 01:19 PM   #8
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Good drop right there. Pretty good vocab too and I really felt the flow of it because it's sort of similar to the flow that I run with. Good drop. Check out my first drop, She's gone now, and hit that up with a line or two.

Good shit, keep spittin.

Laaate.
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Old 09-10-03, 04:15 AM   #9
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thnx.................
Thanx for the feed....................

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Old 09-10-03, 04:22 AM   #10
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Thnx man..
I read yo shit to, alls I gots to say is keep elevatin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Old 09-11-03, 11:46 PM   #11
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PPRROOPPSS!!
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