responses will be highly appreciated(as if yall give a fuck if i appreciate it or not,lol)



Lo-fi
http://64.68.1.185/delite5LoH/sinic...tsfeatmaven.mp3


Hi-fi
http://64.68.1.185/delite5HiH/sinic...tsfeatmaven.mp3

d/l(go 2 the site)
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/s...wizdommusic.htm

(if that link dont work. jst go 2 soundclick's search for artist n type in sinical wizdom)


1st verse- Penskillz
hook- 45
2nd verse- 45
hook- 45
3rd verse- Maven


will return da fav 4 any1 who leaves a reply wit some real crit.1

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IJL.i thought id acknowledge it/now compotitions "losin faith" like Christopher Wallace did//
Step n ur dyin,getN no credit 4tryin/Only time u was in a bitch was ya class trip 2 ellis island/ Please believe? i speak da truth/i see U like retarded kids in empty rooms playin peek-A-boo //
in a battle?id disembowel any withN a circumfrance,kid 45th is da toughest/so like an armless janitor ud"kick da bucket"//

well no one peeps my tracks so.... u suck and your friends do to............

well really its ok... i dont like the beat
but everyone was pretty stable... with some fall offs
work on mixing.
PEEP MY TRACK

good track..

1st guy sounds off but the idea is there, good voice.

chorus.....nope sorry wasnt feeling that. (annoying).

2nd guy unique style ...liked it.

3rd guy flow off at times. but not bad......

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MerK SquAd.

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good lookin out on the crit yall..

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IJL.i thought id acknowledge it/now compotitions "losin faith" like Christopher Wallace did//
Step n ur dyin,getN no credit 4tryin/Only time u was in a bitch was ya class trip 2 ellis island/ Please believe? i speak da truth/i see U like retarded kids in empty rooms playin peek-A-boo //
in a battle?id disembowel any withN a circumfrance,kid 45th is da toughest/so like an armless janitor ud"kick da bucket"//

well not bad..wasn't fealing the chourus that much..
first cat who spit wasn't able to hear him that good,,speach sounded jumbled...not bad though...i think the second cat had a good sounded voice for rhymeing..flow style kinda of sounded like this cat from killa army...pretty nice skillz though....
i was fealing the last cat,style wise..voice...sounded mad young...
and dam that beat is mad old..i herd that shit like 2 years ago..
its a banga though...overall...the song wasn't that bad...

i gave it a 7......keep shineing though...peace..

damn 45 this shit was hot the chorus could have been better but overall nice piece fo real

thanx y'all.. lol@nobody feelin tha hook.. i thought it was tight (up untill iread all y'all replies..lol)

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IJL.i thought id acknowledge it/now compotitions "losin faith" like Christopher Wallace did//
Step n ur dyin,getN no credit 4tryin/Only time u was in a bitch was ya class trip 2 ellis island/ Please believe? i speak da truth/i see U like retarded kids in empty rooms playin peek-A-boo //
in a battle?id disembowel any withN a circumfrance,kid 45th is da toughest/so like an armless janitor ud"kick da bucket"//

nice little song. 1st dude is doin a coo little thing. little more emotion.

Chorus: Not good at all.

2nd nigga is nice. pretty nice. i like fast rappers. lyrics were ok

Chorus:Makes me not want to listen to the rest of the song.

3rd nigga.....reminds me of me... lol... he sounds about 7 but i like his flow. lyrics were coo.........

all popping like im in the middle of a gang warfare. but overall nice drop.