10 lines
you spit 1st
no crew/hate/dick
no feeding or biting

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If you dont understand the vocab get a dick tionary
Yo I'll "spit" down your throat to give-ya cystic-fibrosis
Fullfill your diagnosis and kick-in ya back to fix-ya scoliosis!
I chew BULLETS, that's why you spit so "whack"
Eminem called, he wants his notepad back....
You live in a SHACK, that's why you're such a "tool"
Throw a textbook at me, only way im gettin "schooled"
You're gettin OVER"RULED", and cant "measure-up" to this game
Gettin cut by a death "star" only way you'll ever get fame
It's a SHAME, you hafta come round here and i hafta jaw ya'
Just because you on my nuts doesnt mean you a "balla"

aight...spit

I understood it all right, the words weren't all THAT big,
like the Eminem quote that YOU got as your sig!
You got his picture as an Avatar and you call ME a fan
if he rang you, just give the notepad back to the man
All you know about me, is I mc as skam
and while we are talking bout names, you SURE yours aint stan?
Aaite...
...wasted 30 seconds reading that, and the shit was just wack
30 seconds of my life that you just can't give back!
You could of been famous dawg, a rap superstar
but that wont happen now, I'll run you down with my car!
Leave you ducked in the trunk man, all battered and dead
with a fucked, bleeding stump where you once had a head!!!

=============win or lose dawg, I got an Eminem quote for ya

"...And all that shit you were spittin, man, you need to kill it
Cause your style is like dyin in my sleep...
I just don't feel it"

that was feeding but w/e uppin for votes............................................. .................................

Can I re-post?????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ????????????????????

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Re-Post It or I'll Have Feeble Close This
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This was a good battle i enjoyed it but funda mentals had it with wordplay and multi's the meta's were there aswell.

Skam had some good shit and will be good but not this time dude.....

word.

You wanna front with that dull rap when it's just plain inept?
like a coroner listing autopsy as the cause of your death
Shut your mouth faggot cos that shit needs a rest
'fore it gets mashed the fuck up with a right and a left
Take notes dickhead, I'm the fuckin proffessor
who cares if I'm better when you done know I'm fresher
don't want to mess ya or make you crack from the pressure
and don't get all pissy 'cos I don't want to stress ya
just admit defeat, best to beat a hasty retreat
'less you like me so much that you'd suck off my meat
Like I'm driving, leaving tire tread all over your face
cos I'm too far gone now, I'm addicted to the race
you'd probably understand, if you knew how it feels
to take an escort at 70 through red lights on two wheels
I said i think you got talent, but your lyrics are weak
and could never hope to escape from the havok I wreak
You're fronting like you're a man, like I got something to fear
while you're bent over a keyboard, getting hit from the rear
I represent to y'all, there's only one fake here
do the rest of these rappers even know that you're queer?

this thread is fucked up....and that was more then 10 lines........and.....*confused* upping??...............................

Shouldn't even of come on till later.
Well fucked up!
Got pissed.
Call the win, or re-post the lot.
Whatever man...............
I learned my lessson!

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fund was ok. had good vocab. a couple mentals. some ok punches.
skam was ok, some personals. some attempts at punches

Punches: fund
multies: Fund... but he didnt have lot
vocab: fund
Flow: skam
personals: skam

vote= FUND

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Fundamentalz. the flow of your verse was aight. it could use some help tho. Your disses were creative, but they didnt stand
out Much. Vocab was Ok.

You live in a SHACK, that's why you're such a "tool"
Throw a textbook at me, only way im gettin "schooled"


LoL. this line is Played in all Posistions. (ways). This Punch could have been Better. The set-up for the Punch was Ok, creative.
I liked it, but the Text-Book/Schooled thing. Naw.

It's a SHAME, you hafta come round here and i hafta jaw ya'
Just because you on my nuts doesnt mean you a "balla"

that was your best line In my opinion. Nice.
Over-all that was a Good verse, but it could have
been better worded.
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Skam. I liked your 1rst verse just slightly over the 2nd.
even tho you Fed off his verse, those punches were
somewhat peronals bout his verse.

N-E way. your REAL verse needs some work. You dont
necessarily need Vocab or Multies. which you lacked anyway
in that peticular Flow. The battles On punches and Ryme Scheme.
at least for Text in my opinion. Your 1rst few lines were your Best, then it seemed that you just dropped out of the Battle.
Keep posting and Elevating.


Vote-Fundz

Fuck Sleepers!

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