A spoken word coffeehouse type feeling beat...
about a minute and a half long...enjoy..or say it sucks...

Im that satisfying relaxing feeling that you recieve
Sitting behind the wheel on a sunny sunday morning,
Probem free for an hour out of twenty four if its okay,
Lifes eternal classroom reflections presented for only
You and yours,the populus,moneys great and all but
Im not really concerned about the profiting,If one lifes
Saved to turn content with their surroundings, relationships,
Friends or family my job is done but never finished like
The risings of a sun,the moon also has it part within
This mixture, this little light of mine shall hopefully
Enhance the ears and yearning optics of grown up
Children witout their fathers,mothers as well to
Demonstrate what can be recieved from college,
That content feeling with success,
Im content that im blessed with the ability
To influence without drugs and change
directs of faulty movement,
Marijuana used to be the ghostwriter
Until I hitched a train for flows tighter,
It seems to lock my thoughts in for hours,
Im unsure of its final destination,
Im content with my surroundings
Say im content with my surroundings,
But the contents of this package
Want a better life therefore im rhyming,
Loudly...soft spoken...open...proudly...
In closing represent yourself first and foremost...

Dont sleep on your destiny just let it be something heavenly...
Soulful intro retrospect music to enrich your silhouette feel this..

(2 different pronunciations as well as definitions)
*Content - A feeling of satisfaction..glee..happiness
- The products of a package or product

@ - a + c = All Rights Reserved

hmmm nice peice all together good style
i understood wat you were gettin at i belive all together good peice man
wordplay was nice it flowed great so id gie it a 8/10 it cood be improved on like more harder words but its still good peice

thank you for replying to this and I honestly appreciate it
bye rapbattles poetic scriptures..keep elevating forreal...
only audio now for a lil more than an ep to push..take care

la paz

no look pass....

^^^lol^^^

i liked the peice alot it was difficult to read but i slowed down and read each line and i got the image out of it
i love spoken word poetry
i write like that some times but you really nailed the essence of the art here
~~elev~~ in audio for PT
pz DF

are you gunna drop this peice in audio?

another good piece.............didn't shine to me like the last one but had a solid feel to it. The imagery was excellent and the flow was there albeit a bit hidden......most likely will blow them away in audio.....keep doing ya thang and good luck in audio..........hopefully i'll see you there soon......1

thank you profitt and everyone else honestly..
I have one version with rage against the machine
like saul williams like guitar riffs and then one over
a smoothing beat...unsure of which one to go with...

it wasnt meant to rhyme but it does..dont now how else
to say it but the beat wouldnt make you skip over it....

thank you...honestly

no look pass

a very nice piece, i never read anythin like this one here coz i dont often peep in here but this has changed my mind, it must take a lot of skill to do that coz there isnt a solid structure like rap, it was tight as fuck playa keep writing

this was ill,it had a good structure nice vocab too,all together tight piece,keep droppin.~1~

thank you

Niiiiiiice piece here, Content..I really liked the way you did this, incorporating your name into the verse many times with multiple meanings..Very creative...Also nice imagery and emotion in this, i could really feel what you were saying, especially the part about the sunday drive, that really stood out to me for some reason..This was very creatively done, with a nice choice of words to really accentuate the whole vibe of the piece. Nice writez fella. Stay up and keep elevatin.
Peace.

Gege..Ima blunt...some hot sex...a beautiful mind..
all incorporated into seven letters...I honestly
appreciate any form of 'props' coming from
you because theres a select few that could
actually get on someday..*hint hint*...
once again I appreciate your words girly..

la paz

upping..why..I dont fuckin know im wack

up up and away...