aight, 20 lines max, 10 min, normal votin rules, u kno, no dr, crew, hate wat not

aight then...

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yo, cryp-four "symbols", all that's left from his "drum line"/
he probably so "poor" from makin no "cents" he won't drop a "dime"/
he'll type wit just one hand so he can't spell shit/
cause he broke his arm twerkin so hard to RB "member pics"/
he'll probably use other's flows to win this/
all i know is i gotta put Jam Masta Jay back into his "crypt"/
u'll probably try to "flip tha script" like u was Snoop Dogg"in"/ (actin like snoop dogg)
but i spit "rhino" flows so they don't "ecko" back out ur "empty" noggin/
just don't "log in" at all so u don't get "kicked back out"/
for tryin to win like a dream u had afta i made u "black out"/
u "crapped out" like this battle happened at Las Vegas/
and "rapped out" ur mind so u had no breath to debate this/
i'll win and u won't cause u don't no wat winnin's about/
MY mic "Magic" continues even afta my "mana pool's" been "taped out"/
no one will see u no more, u'll go and try to hide/
for bein embarrased like Osama expect u won't stay alive/
i'm an "Undertaker", jus like ur mama, i gave u tha "last ride"/
make sure tha dead stays dead, CRYP'][' will neva come back to life/
and i'll be at ur funeral in order to make sure u "rest in pieces"/
CRYP'][', no need for a will, u had nutin left afta i let tha "lyrical thieves" in/

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aight, spit...ur on and doin other battles so do this one n shit...u got til 9-3 midnight if u ain't seen bitch-slapped yet...

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u got til midnight tonight, i upped it to hope u see it cause i don't want no no-show shit, spit like i did (less than half n hour, 10 min were in bathroom) won't take long...

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this thread i am closin, yes i am/
maybe u can battle me again?/
next time at least show so I can win/
no shows r scared like i was sin/

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Checkin in to let u know i havent forgot about this, but im not spittin till later tonite

Peace............................................. .....nice verse.......................

Your fuckin ass better start Gohst ridin cuz U aint goin No where A-lone/
The fake Personals and Cheap mama cracks were boring like
Rest-Homes/

Stop rappin your shit, Another fuckin newb he's just like the Rest/
Fix up ya Profile A.S.A.P cuz Freestylin Aint in your best Interest/
(Its in his profiles interest)

U an Angel wit out its Wings so you certainaly not Fly/
Your another Guy wit corny lines in his Sig, Sayin he's Blessed
but u about to Die/

Wit lines like that u should make like Papa doc and Choke/
Your real shit may be over the Mic but they still blow like Coke/
(Blow is slang for cocain)

WTF was that speech u gave about no shows on Page One/?
Im spittin now u stunned, Open ya mouth n' load and cock a gun/
(lol check his shit on page 1, wtf was that lil ryme)

Im injected wit sick ryhmes ppl tend to say CRYPTS infected/
Ppl turn this bitch down, Like Orphans he always gets Rejected/

In reality your skills wouldnt be excepted cuz agents are alot Strickter/
God dam ur verse made me sicker than Drinkin Beer before Liqour/

Finisher:

I cant believe this kid he Makes me wana HURL/
Fuck it, this bitch Swallows more Nut than SQUIRALS/


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Vote CRYP']['

Came harder with the punches played off opponent well bothe was aight but CRYP'][' came harder in my opinion
Vote=CRYP']['

Vote- Angellicarl

He Had More Wordplay
A Better Rhyme Scheme
and His Punches Were better

Crypt Had an Aight verse But some of his lines were just fuckin played the fuck out.

KeyStyle Vs. AB/CD

^^^^^^^poll-vote in this battle

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Vote goes to Ang
felt like he came better, betta punches and creativity... so I'll have to go for him for that simple reason. No hate intended though.
Vote - ang

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Yeah, ang did pretty good in this battle, nice wordplay / flow / punches etc, it wasnt all one sided, this was a fairly even battle but my votes with Ang on this one.

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Peace!