aight....

10 lines
u spit first
no hate votes
no krew votes
no dick rydin
good luck and drop quickly
reposted due to lack of votes.....

syscols verse:
i spit all around ya head so you can hear me with "surround sound"/
lots his dick to shrincage and doctors said"it'll never be found"/
bitch i should be crowned,rip you to shit like im a blood hound/

man you so dumb you failed school cause you didnt know 2+2/
fuckin held back 9 times in kindergarten just to learn to tie ya shoe/
cant beleive you can type with all ya cum actin on ya fingas as glue/

blast you,smash you,leave you clutchin to the ground cause thats the only place you goin/
6 feet under to be exact,cause your burns aint hurtin and ya shit aint flowin/

you know your moms pussy like the back of your hand and vise versa/
wanna battle me cause i have sum skill atleast and i will never disperse-ya

WHACK ASS SHIT
w/e though spit soon

K.O. verse:

microphone set to "merk"........

ur spit wack, i'de say u have a speach impediment but this is typing,he's gon make excuses like "my fingers broke so i cant do dope typing", u couldnt beat me if u had FIFTY doin ya pre-writting//1

do the right thing pass this battle on or drop it now have u screamin "HOT POTATO" when my verse comes down//2

prepare to get served cuz im da merk doctor with no patience, my "punch surgery" fuck up ya face make u my naxt patitent for face lifts//3

man im juss plain doper than you, shouldnt test me cuz u cant rip thru//4

datz da type of shit u couldnt do if u wuzz holdin a gat, an ak-47,a revolvor or mach//5

if i faced u wit my back u still couldnt hit me,below average spit u could never diss me, ur punches have no connection a.k.a. MISSED ME!//6

ur punches is like ur only and imaginary friend they aint really there, itz no wunder when u swingin that u only hitten air//7

now let me off dis cock sucker in wayz datz unknown, my spit brusies brainz, bringz da pain and fucks up ya chromosomes//8

i beat u in line 9 wit still one line left, picken his punches for dis text out his rhyme book like a multiple choice test//9

u dont wanna see me but u really da ghost dude, cuz after u spit that verse ur bitch ass getz booed//10

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I liked ko's spit better it seemed like he thought about his more.....the hits were weak in this battle though yo.......like one of my battles lol!!!!

anyways ko gets ma vote
go vote up my battles....................

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aight. Syscol your verse sounded simple. Its Ok
to have a simple sounding verse but you want
better punches if you do so.

your Very first line was the best. Just because
of the wordplay in that. None of your Punches
really STOOD OUT at all. No personals, which can really
help you win a Battle. You have the IDEA down on your Punches, You juss have to make them sound Better with Better
Flow as well.
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aight. K-O your verse was Aight. Your kinda sorta Multie in the first 2 or 3 lines was Decent, i liked the Ending with 50.
some parts of your verse juss sounds like you watched
comedy central and posted there Joke. for Example.

do the right thing pass this battle on or drop it now have u screamin "HOT POTATO" when my verse comes down//2

Ok, that was an Ok punch, but this shit doesnt sound
right. It has No-Flow or Ryme schem what so Ever in
my opinion.

none of your other verses stood out. Seemed like
you thought of a few Good lines, then said "fuck it".
the Middle and End of your Verse wasnt that Strong.

Over-all this battle was Ok. But one man took this
my Vote-KO..

sorry i cant POLL VOTE, but i aint a NEWB.

Fuck Sleepers. . . .POLL VOTES NEEDED
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=76279

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dont sleep on this.............................................. ...........................................

dont sleep, uppin............................................. .............................................

uppin, dont sleep on dis yall.............................................. .................................................. .......

DONT SLEEP ON THIS, LETZ GET DIS SHIT OVER WIT ALREADY!!!!!!UPPIN!!!!!! .................................................. ......

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