no need for explanation....read the title....
READ SLOW FOR UNDERSTANDING

~death is rap, even more~
~tell to darkness in explore~
~breath held, i open doors~
~candle lit a taking souls right or left~
~handle this in death~
~choose way, which to go~
~lose always and everything wrote~
~move passages, pages turn beginnings cold~
~shivering spine my pen dropped~
~chilvary and happiness stopped~
~bittersweet is what once thought~
~slit wrists, bleeding, life fading~
~this often gets life all for debating~
~table to walking, go standing still~
~able not, thinking too straight keeps it real~
~labeled plots my kill~
~standing to couch is close~
~landing on punches connecting slow~
~fighting keep, pouring blood~
~lighting cigarettes calming nerves coming luck~
~notice what(s) is hellucination~
~lotus dark seeing beginning desperation~
~loaded gun is nearby~
~knowin there is fear lies~
~going away, turned looked mirror~
~flowing what(s) is clearer~
~seeing straight anymore high not~
~being real i'ma boiling life blazing pot~

in case u don't get it......read forward between every ~ ~ and backwards from the end.....word for word....lol....should be loved for those who understand....

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lol....damnit.....5 or 6 views and no reply.....

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damn son...this was sick...kinda abstract...and the whole backwardz reading thig is madd unique...creativity at it's fullest...I got a feelinga lot of cats ain't gonna understand this though...lol...but keep doin' ya thing cuzzin'...oh...and can you hit up my 3 latest open mics?????? They called "the truth ft. Enhance"
"4:12am(living in death)" and "cleptomaniak'z fantasy"...thanks man...holla...

Liked the backwords thing nice creativity, nice drop....

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Fuck you

That was a sick drop bro....................
Keep up the good work......................



PEACE~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~>

yeah...the basis is a guy is high and he is hellucinating....check it......

~lose always and everything wrote~
~move passages, pages turn beginnings cold~
~shivering spine my pen dropped~

^^trying to write while high....

~standing to couch is close~

^^standing to couch is close.....he sits

~notice what(s) is hellucination~

^^basis of story

~going away, turned looked mirror~

^^he looked to the mirror....while he was walking away and turning

should take care of some confusion.....

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i don't have enough braincels to comprehend that....lol


nah raw sawn liked the style lil complicated but i got it holmes....
vocab was off but still all the ish was hot...

ones

ILL SHIT Finally some worthy Open Mics i read.................


How u used the creativeness is wonderfull man

Yo Inventive dawg,liked alot of tha wordplay and abstract is a good word to describe this,alot of quotable lines,but most of tha peice was on balance good.
I'd give this 8.5/10 dawg.

Peace,yo hit mine up plz.

coo coo....appreciate it.....vocab had to be weak in this though....hard to talk backwords with big words...lol.....

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lol uppin for my anerxic cat her named sabastion

^^name is not sabastion.....lol

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like everyone else said it was tight nice work

^^think ur just trying to get posts up......

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man hot shit here, never seen that before, its like a fuckin murder mystery or somethin. nice references to the mirror, with the mirrored verse and shit. like the (S) hallucinations and shit. nice work could this possibly worthy of legends?