Yup..here's a story

...enjoy

Works finally payed of and science equations have given results
So delighted he glows and it sustains just reminscing to cope
Felt like she awoke from a deep sleep from suffering and pain
Now retain hot glucose keepin life sweet with all the flames
Problems tamed but happily opposing all the wild fun reaped
No more salted tears weap into wounds, now smiles in heat
Treat viewers by pullin tricks...or was that like trick or treat
The treat has been had but really a trick...not seeming so deep
Not taken that leap but the earth beneath you crumbles away
With nothing to say but hold a curse,why was my views betrayed?
Life can be conveyed now words priceless not having any worth
Been watching David Blane the whole time...no dope dispersed
Kept re-versing hopin to progress but ended up going backwards
He had become a cow boy but what he wanted was to rapheards
But nows gettin served...

Like rabbit infront of the head-light...

Didn't swerve

But as a cat of hip hop you get 9 lives to expand upon pride
Did he have enough time before he made mistakes and realised
At least you tried!!...that isn't an honour thats corruption
Reality was he faced seduction into abruption of desrutcion
A stubbord son not to see what he had done...being false
Now left wihtout a pukse shocked like he had seen a ghost


He looked in the mirror

Don't sleep

poetic deep and tight nuffg said

like word~perfect said, it was poetic and i felt more like i was readin a poem and woulda been betta as a poem in my view, as a rap it was aight, but u gotta work on tha flow so it doesn't read like a poem...

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Don't sleep

Do Not Sleep

deep shit yo
nice vocab
good flow
nice peice
peace!