a dictionary opened to tha right of me/
but it's burnt wit nothin left, like insides of MC's/
wasn't anything to do wit spontanious combustion/
they jus trusted in a man who neva done in tha ear: mind fuckin/
i'm stuck in a hole, closed, no where to go/
cept up higher so i could desire wat angels keep on tha down low/
my flow already exited tha room two minutes ago/
and hata's still holdin their chest preparin to go/
but i got all tha angels on call waitin/
cause each was wantin to get "in touch wit Satan"/
my percision is precise enough to "shoot dice"/
made a hit list already finished listed wit who's nice/
i kill leaders so all that's left is a following/
and then tha preachers, so it's always Halloween/
Virgin Mary got popped cause she's swallowin me/
fathered tha next Jesus n had HIM follow tha scene/
Not Anti-christ, imma anti-anti,
anted up before tha start of angel n demons eye to eye/
now i'm rich afta tha judgement came/
payed off G-O-D and got him jus a "G" brain/
so where tha "O-D" go off to afta i was finished wit surgery/
Jesus took it and ended up in "purgatory"/
but in tha end it was still me on top/
hangin onto an anvil and i still neva dropped/

feedback...

FYI: i'm not puttin this against God or Jesus or religion period...

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noy bad i liked it your concept was easy to grasp and dialect was ill

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i agree with word^^
easy concept and all
vocab was good

i like da way you rhyme
peace

thanx, yea, peeps say my rhymes r tha best part of my rap skills, i don't know though, uppin...

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good good...concept was dope...word play was iight but vocab was great 1

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thanx uppin...

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i kill leaders so all that's left is a following/
and then tha preachers, so it's always Halloween/

your lyrics are deep. keep that moving

that was good your vocab was alright, but i liked ur concept

thanx, uppin...

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imma up this one more time cause I liked it...let's get some more feedback...

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