now it seams unbelievable.....
the unconcievable,percievables-
the unretreviable-
but i want it all or nothing-
no bluffing-if my punches dont get it im snuffing-
why you think i chose battle rap-godamnit!!!
it's quicker to bitch slap- the planet-
for right now im a try URN~en-(earn)
with these how joints cause i stay burnen-
it aint battles tact-verbs mean a physical act-
so vebally iwant to smack-the cat-
who tried to clap- 50 for not finishing that-

NONCENTZ YOU FOUL!!!!! then give me 2 free shots-
and id aim it at- PUFFY and DUPRI for killen us with crap-
beat them over the head with JUSTIN TIMBERLAKE till i here they bones go POP-

you know what would be hot???
if i could burn every wack cd-
i purchased waisting my salary.
found it sick....only cause i had allergies.
that's what im talken-
just thought from the head.
outline they contracts in chalk an-
tell them they careers dead.
what i say is what i mean press rewind-
you couldnt make the top 10 with a 9-
that plat aint shit you still a bitch ass-
money dont equal skill just look at RASS KASS-
i know you felt this-
for you PLATINUM PLAQUE is a diagnosis from a dentist-
might shit spirals up like a flat top with a perm-
im tired of my rhymes smoken so i wirte lines inNOCODERM-
i mean im saying son I GOT JONBLAZE-
...(qoute MADD RAPPER).....
THAT'S WHATS WHAT !!!!!!
like a broke hoe i dont give a fuck-
fired a flame to the game-
farted on it now i blew up.
and i'll be damned-fuck you i am~ a hater....
i wanna kill EMINEM for STAN-
then hire him to kill every rapper i cant stand-
see EM! i also got a plan-
im also gonna kill someone on a song and get paid a hundred grand.
after that do it again sept this time grab an AK-
aim it at KAYSLAY and JAY-
and anyone else that gets in my way.
create a gay website for a LLs' sexual appeal-
cut LIL KIMS' tits off for acting like she real-
im the HATER and as a hater im unload a pail-
os cocain send to cops adressed as your fan mail-
just so i can laugh when i think of you being raped in jail.

nice drippity drop son...as usual...the vocab and wordplay were hot...and the topic was original...and the flow was on point...keep doin' ya thing pops...and damnit...check out my open mic collab with COM...

Original hot SHit there B! ~1~

THNKS UPPIN

UPPIN

funny as fuck
like your humour
nice word play in there mixed with comedy and the flow was good as well
good read

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can you read the rules, dude?

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