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Old 09-05-03, 09:41 AM   #1
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Yo It have to bust!!!!!!! So take this shit personal

If you think I aint got the balls for rap…peep the blue scrotom-
When it comes to bars I got so many if you try to download em-
It could crash the pantium chip to you DELL modem-
Brain waves Escalating by escabating my cerebro….. dictating-
Words on beat migrating-
if they hating-leave em imaginating-
How my thought’s circulate like the earth on its axis-
Advancements in word content increase like state taxis-
……………………..If you feel me……………….
Scream”FUCK THE WORLD”while I masterbate to an atlas-
Nigguz is SPINELESS no wonder nobody ever BACKed us-
My word array-lyrical diplay- salivial glands-
Expand-with bacteriay-
the only virus known as the antibody for the Y2K-
These rappers suck so bad they aboute to impload-
that’s reverse for expload-

your shit aint fat- they anerexic in fact-take a laxitive tic tac-
cause your crap getting flushed down the commode-
Im diverse and when im in that mode-
im NE~O…..just to Looking in the mirror would reflect matrix codes-
historically known-before microphones-
NOAH ARK was my my fault I couldn’t stop when I started to flow-
Now I flow in SINK to keep control-
Having my internal unit ercaed with a basic-draining unit to replace it-
going crazy like this is how I stay sedated-
Piss the world off so I wont be over hydrated-
and if you can feel what I CREATED-then that means I MADE IT-
where my platinum at? Fuck it you can keep it I don’t need it-
I blaze these joint and leave fans weeded-
who aint feeling me?
oh them kids that look balemic- believe it-
I only expose them so everyone can see it-
Like porn pics-you cats got to be pussy since you say im a dick.
aint it sick?
been in a minute and busted i aint the one you want to fuck with-


NONCENTZ only chill with a few cats that’s ill-
cause only a few are real-
BLUNT AND MY DAWG RULE-ayura que me ahuda-lo huda!!!!!!
the O,A….. wack fools- I plead the 5th ….sorry-
Fuck it I plee the 5th twice to rep the 10th(degree)-
back off me!!!!

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Old 09-05-03, 10:32 AM   #2
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Old 09-05-03, 11:01 AM   #3
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nice wordplay but some bad flow points, didn't seem like much of a diss if that's wat u were lookin for...hit ur head on a cloud, naomean?...
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Old 09-05-03, 11:13 AM   #4
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LIKE WHAT IF I MAY ASK...and no its not a battle or diss just an expression of my mind

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Old 09-05-03, 11:34 AM   #5
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if u mean tha flow points, u may of thought if flowed just fine but to a person "reading" it, it may not flow perfect...if u mean to hit ur head on a cloud, my way of sayin elavate to UR personal best...
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Old 09-05-03, 11:38 AM   #6
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no i mean what will you change
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Old 09-06-03, 02:46 AM   #7
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Old 09-06-03, 08:51 AM   #8
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nother funny piece
word play was dope more comedy
flow wasnt the best ive seen it but was solid in most parts
good shit
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Old 09-06-03, 10:55 PM   #9
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I liked what I saw. I won't be overly critical, it was sicker than your average.
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Old 09-06-03, 11:28 PM   #10
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hot! wordplay was tight. I liked this line, it blew my mind.

Scream”FUCK THE WORLD”while I masterbate to an atlas

damn good open mic. keep writing.

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Old 09-07-03, 05:58 AM   #11
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nice drop WORD~PERFECT...damn good wordplay...blew me away...shit was hot to def...we gotta do another collab...mos definitley...
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Old 09-07-03, 06:02 AM   #12
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YO IM OPEN TO REP 10TH WHENEVER POP
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Old 09-07-03, 12:17 PM   #13
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pretty good job here.. the subject and ya
thoughts on it came out really good and the
flow made it a good read keep it up
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Old 09-07-03, 01:49 PM   #14
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thnks
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Old 09-08-03, 01:44 AM   #15
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