Rules are:
10 Lines=5 Bars MAX
No d/r votes
No crew votes
No hate votes

You spit first i'll spit after
No deadline but asap
good luck

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Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

uppin for his verse............................................. ......................................

__________________
Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

hurry up damn i wanna see this battle...........what u scared illynice?......................................... ...

where are you????????............uppin for his verse............................................. ....

__________________
Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

im here nigga.. you fuckin spit first.. .................................................. .................................................. .....................

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"My intelligence begins where yours peaks at" ~Canibus

Rules are you spit first u can't change them i'll drop after you

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Plus u called me out.....

__________________
Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

whatever aiight hold up................................................ .................................................. ..................................

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"My intelligence begins where yours peaks at" ~Canibus

You bringing the heat little faggot.. ill extinguisgh fire/
plus i got a good way to distinguish liars/
My verbal english's higher..plus my fuckin WHOLE RAP IS SCARY, my FLOWS HAVE YOU BURIED with VOCABULARY , that will put an end to this bitch ass HOE ADVERSARY/
saying that your TIGHT is a FAT lie, ill smack this fag guy, with a BLUE rag and give him a BLACK eye/YOu's a fag ...DIE!, ill rape your moms WET pussy and turn the hoes ass dry/ dont ask why.. im fuckin sick cat.. ill fuck your chick black.. make her lick my dick sacks till the prostitues lips chapped.. ill fuckin bust in the hoes mouth and fead her tic tacks/ you shouldnt even want to spit back / and in your JAW.. im a give you a BREAK like kit cat.. ypu and your fuckin mother are a bitch ass!

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"My intelligence begins where yours peaks at" ~Canibus

lol *shakes head* i'll drop in a few............................................... .......................

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

i'ma go ahead and keep it simple so voters can actually read it without sayin' "what the hell" lol

...:::Rest In Peace:::...

You must got a death-wish u don't know what u messed-with//
Muthafucka bought a "gay pride flag" so he could say he "repped-it"//
Bitch got caugh butt naked wit his pants-down//
"Dickless" bitch tried to "play" but made his "hands-frown"//
Called-me-out and you wonder-how u got more "problems" then a "math-book"//
You wonderin' how i "fixed" this lyrical "food" of ill-ness don't u know i'ma "wrath-cook"//
You readin' this rhyme and i'm scarin' u shitless//
Your "punches" are "hitless" wit "metas" that are "wit-less"//
Wit the closing line allow me to explain somethin impor-tant//
Next time u say you gon' "take me to school" u better "floor-it"//

blah... quik keystyle sucks compared to my real shit but i think it'll cut it

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

ok.. go ahead and spit your wirrtin shit.. i typed my shit on the spot.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..

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"My intelligence begins where yours peaks at" ~Canibus

lol.. your shit is wack.. but youll probably win being that it seems that whenever a newbie battles a vet.. they lose.. cuz you knwo more people on here.. its aiight though

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"My intelligence begins where yours peaks at" ~Canibus

i'd say remix got his in every category, illeynice was fucking shit nuff said .......................... ............................... ............

damn man ^ my shit is wack? that is the wackest verse i ever spit and i'll still merk you............ stop swayin' votes.......................fuckin' herb

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

Well, I'll be honest and say that Illynice hit much harder than Remix.
No doubt.
But that's all he brought.
Punches mixed with multi's.
No talent shown, really, cept for the ability ta find vocab.
But the structure, flow, metas, and wordplay was controlled by Remix all the way.

Remember, boys and girls...
Hard ass punches aren't effective if ya just yell em.

Although, truthfully, he did more than yell em, he at least, rhyme yelled em.

Peace

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