10 to 15 bars

no dick ridin, no crew votes



my flows come in strains tha drain ya brain leavin you mentally disturbed//
or i could bust-heat,or just-speak when i touch tweek which ever you prefer//
kick rhymes to tha curb like we was in a grudge-match,watch ya faggot ass plug-crack and still have room to fudge-pack//
my rhymes rippin interior,im drippin inferior but i still soak-up,,i hit mics and smoke-dutch while you choke-nut//
bring pain in double, then attack in couples leavin u as bubbles in this puddle//
wipe free tha rubble to find ya corpse,burnt wit flames hot enough to burn we call that scorch//
burnt-to-crisp,turned-to-shit now u a man cause u earned-ya-dick//
heres my premier and they call u mentally-ill,your experimentaly-till//
i release ya wackness,tha fact-is ya done,u aint even started yet and u still think its for fun,well ask em all whos still number one//
and when you find out and tha depression-sets,let me show u how far your agression-gets.

check in...
coo verse kid..u got sum skill maybe a chance in this battle
actally i doubt it......
check innnnnnnnnnnn my verse will be up shortlyy

UH////////

Dyverse just take a seat..YOur rhymes couldn't "get right" Even If You "Switched a lane"/
This Faggot syndacate only "Wrappin nice" When "Christmas came"/
Y'all aint on my "level",the only thing "Holdin Y'all up" is Crutches/
You couldnt get emcee of The Week If I Put Your Name In MY punches/
Only thing this cat's is "Paccin" Is Bag Lunches......

You Gonna Have A Phobia Of Mics By The Time These Lines-Is-Finished/
Terrified-An'-Timid,I’m Gonna Leave Your Brain In A Briefcase So You Can Mind-Yo-Business/
My psycho steez disaffected by my mortality and morphine ingestion/
Antibiotics and dialysis wouldn't stop Me from teaching THis so caled mid weight DEATH'S LESSONS/
You obviously have NO CREW...Maybe You should hire vets/
Son I'll "Beat" Yo' Ass So Easy,With ONE HAND Like fans Of Cyber Sex/
I'll put the heat to your face like you opened a stove/
how u gunna battle newbs an front your a a mid weight that 0-0

uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^

uppin damn been dayz kid............................................... ..........\\.

yypp[;;r;rrnhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

this was a really nice battle
both mc's came hard but mentally-ill came harder with better punches and flow and word play and all that good shit

poll vote= ill

nice battle... both came out hard, but I gotta say that ill got it. He came with betta punches, more creativity and just had an overall betta verse. No hate vote, just honest uppin.
Probs to the both of ya

peace

I got Mentally Ill in this one.... Better punches and wordplay

Fav line: 'Im gonna put heat to Ur face like ya open the stove.....'

holly shit ill come tryout for this crew

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1146#post761146

cause ure punches blazed that other kid it was murder

Dyverse just take a seat..YOur rhymes couldn't "get right" Even If You "Switched a lane"/
This Faggot syndacate only "Wrappin nice" When "Christmas came"/

^^this was good


You Gonna Have A Phobia Of Mics By The Time These Lines-Is-Finished/
Terrified-An'-Timid,I’m Gonna Leave Your Brain In A Briefcase So You Can Mind-Yo-Business/

^^so was this....

coem tryout for the crew i am in it and many other vets

vote:ill

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More Comming soon!

uppin for one more vote ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^

Man Mentally ripped this cat str8 up........Better everything even though he through a couple played punches with that "Mind ya Business" and "Wrappin at Christmas" lines.......Diverse man u need to shorten up ya punches man....let em connect short and sweet....that extended shit could never be rapped out loud.....

Vote = M.I.

Good Battle though & props to both............