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09-06-03, 10:26 PM
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..:Self-Portrayel Portrait:..
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aqua painted color tainted portrait of my decibels//
your my canvas, and my paintbrush voice wrecks hell// dispel salvidor dali archery, ricocheting holes in harmony// trapping all souls in my armory// far see horizon, shape sizing, frame shifting paint lion// pump harder then the heart of a miyan, vien busting titan// im cancerous on the canvas, wrestling word painting champion// stampeding stamping ramping taurus brawling battler messiah// napalm breath, firearm shooting stars, im the artistic murderer// burn ya up with with icicle incinerator churners// make van gogh cough with multi-color termites// rip his other ear with my artistic drum bass flights// lightning vice grips on high cliffs with a pair of thunder tongs camera tounge, my words are 10 frames of animation// images epiliptic wrecking brains of those who think basic// bring tazers to aquariums, and spread my wisdom// sharp intelligence, drum the harp of ilibis// hover on cloud 9, a rain spitting angel// hell - no halo replaced by horns, rage all// rage all tension, like 100 feet springs// thrusting off space stations through saturns rings// my patterns brings logical obstacles halting all thresholds// origami folds on society nobles constructing human boats// traveling across the river of souls// word of warning, face off with me is a risk// liturature needs paint fingers, and i got its fist// |
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09-06-03, 11:12 PM
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uppin
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09-06-03, 11:38 PM
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this was ill,good vocab,good wordplay,this was clean it stayed on point,what ever tha point was,keep spittin.~1~
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09-07-03, 08:45 AM
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uppin
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09-07-03, 12:14 PM
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pretty good shit.. i wasnt really feelin dat topic
but ur flow was koo and ur vocab was aight not much i think think of.. keep it up tho man |
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09-07-03, 07:10 PM
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uppin for sum decent feedback
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09-07-03, 07:14 PM
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IP:
excellent vocab, flow, alright structure. An overall nice piece, PROPS! Now hit my open mic up called "Agony."
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09-08-03, 02:43 PM
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uppin this peice
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09-08-03, 05:16 PM
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IP:
Yeah, I like that piece. Pretty cool style there and the vocab was damn good. I like the last bar and overall, I felt this shit. Good drop. Hit up my first ever piece in Open Mic: She's gone now...
Let me know what you think of my drop. Laaate. |
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09-08-03, 06:13 PM
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uppin
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09-08-03, 08:40 PM
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IP:
uppin this piece, i might turn this into an audio
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09-08-03, 09:04 PM
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Yo as i said on msn descrpiptive and very catchy vocab and wordplay,nice style of spit,good use of meta's and multies,good stuff.
Peace |
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09-09-03, 11:35 AM
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uppin
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10-07-03, 10:38 AM
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yo this shit is tight. Nice vocab and wordplay.
Keep the good lyrics flowin. |
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