first and for most im new to this site/someone talk back ill come with a bite/just know this, that im tight on the mic/my name is HCabuser/im not a women user, but a gun user/so step back/before u get ya face smacked/ill make u mentally ill/crazy addict poppin pills/so battle me, and get the greatest thrills/and after we're done, ya screaming and running over the hills

read the 'whackness emergency center' for some tutorials

you got flow which is nice, but you need to improve everything from multis to vocab etc etc etc.