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09-07-03, 09:10 AM | #1 | |
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Sunday Drop: Homecoming
IP:
People applaud him, get lost in, his words as evil is watching
While wearing a white collar to fight off the, demons that haunt him Need this!? He’s got it, he spots the, good from his podium Where people know they’ve sinned but come to him to show repent It’s lonely in, his little world, where past favors would Ruin your word, because of the rep of this bad neighborhood Where crimes make the news, and the star spangled banner lies Where you can cry a river that’ll get washed away by anger’s tides Where crews banish minds, who’ll never get the best of sin And where no one gives respect to god’s representitive You can never win, but then again, this is made by their judgement While lost souls crossroads that are paved with destruction It ain’t great cause he’s bugging, that he’s left with the nuisance Of running his life’s goal but no one respects what he’s doing So at best, he’s losing his mind in a whirlwind of demons and sins And what’s the point of living like this if everyone treats him like shit? .. He’s the reverend of this bad neighbourhood church No one respects him, so everyday he goes later and later to work Our saviour’s his word, he says Jesus will release our blunder But the congregation is made up of drug fiends and teenage mothers He’s lost his feet, and he no longer believes that God will speak And his loss is grief, trying to say what he was taught to preach But he’s got to see that, there is no love and harmony While this city is loading up their guns and armoury Teenage kids are dealing hits, the danger’s at its fullest As the gangs deliver death from silver chambers with a bullet But this is the hood, there’s no hope to seek, or spoken peace It’s just a hopeless scene that’s destroyed his hopeful dreams And as this reverend tries his all, he keeps losing patience While whites shoot black, and jews are shooting asians It’s blooming hatred, and even today it strides as he prays at night Trying to stay alive, but this noose of hate has frayed his mind He’s down on his knees, praying to his Father who founds his beliefs As he says "Please Father, just allow them some peace" And God answers back “Don’t worry, son, I can’t see that love’ll grow So you can forget about Earth, I think it’s time you come back home” .. Jesus died for our sins, he did it for the good of people But his second coming showed that this world is full of evil In the form of a reverend, he faced open weather And proved that forbidden fruit always tastes so much better No one paid him attention or respect, and it has lifted his shoulders Cause it’s time he goes back home, his mission is over
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09-07-03, 12:13 PM | #2 | |
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IP:
damn dat shit was tight.. the flow was good
the topic was mad nice.. it had a good storyline.. but yo keep dat vocab up peace |
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09-07-03, 02:35 PM | #3 | |
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IP:
wow. amazing piece.
your concept was original & that kept my attention throughout the piece. the mechanics were simply perfect..at no point in the story did i say "the flow fell off here" or "he couldve done this better". whoever brought you back over from RnR deserves a pat on the back as you are no doubt a great addition to RB. 9/10 |
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09-08-03, 03:15 AM | #4 | |
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IP:
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09-08-03, 06:28 AM | #5 | ||
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that would be me then. = ) sorry for this response Bare, i'll edit this post later with my thoughts. . |
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