What I write is mine-SO i wouldnt take back the shit i say aboute you if i pressed rewind.
instead of helpen your flow Id rather kill you in an ounce of rhyme-waite till your drowning in it before I toss you another line.

IS CENTZ REAL?

Ill give you a sign-in the form of a middle finger for you to quote it in mime.
you just a contradiction like the judis religion after jesus’s crucifixtion-saying your real but its in a world of fiction.
tatoo it to your style read the inscription...word for word.
you Mearly some ubserd- herb-looking foolsich like Titanic m.c.’s rocken Icebergs.
Fucken retards!!!!!!!!!!! you only gangsta when you perform in th suburbs-while im the block like my city streets and curves.

when NONCENTZ's on mics- scream “JESUS CHRIST”
praise-in amaze- i wont ever die but i will raise- the 8th finger to you WEEK M.C.'S and SUN you like the 7th DAY.

Sick in tired of the bull-90 percent of you are nothing but fools-tellen me to elivate............don’t hate!

this aint a flow This is just druel.it aint worth the headache it takes to create.

if i wanted to be an ass id increase my flow and break the earths gravitational pull-
by Expanding the seas and turnen the earth into a pool.
with no land mass-for those who want to step in my path.
so we will collide!

i'll spit nine at you and be charged with lyrical homicide.
meaning you just got BEAT… no wonder you can’t catch the VIBE.

im CUM~en off HOT enough to leave you COCK SWALLOWING ho’s BRAIN’S fried.
Blowing up the top ten rap men cause I wont be denied-

THIS IS My spot!!!!!!!!!!!
at being hot-step to the side- and aint nobody TURNED ME ON to rap, Im refusen to dick ride.

since you question your sex you probably find it confusen.
How Im only usen- ¼ of my ¼ thought cause i do this for amusement.

JOKEN rappers-NONCENTZ got MAD SKILLZ like the NOD FACTOR_
(mad skill first video was the nod factor)

with a cd like a nuclear reactor-17 tracks rewady to blow inside the cd frame compactor.

so when it slips from the palm-
im droppen the bomb-my body of rap's so rotten i preserve it by writting in liquid embalm.

i'll spit nine at you and be charhed with lyrical homicide.
meaning you just got BEAT… no wonder you can’t catch the VIBE.

This flow was kinda rushed it seemed, it had some nice points, I've seen you do better but it was still pretty tight...uppin it

Wurd^^^

Some nice points and lines in this piece...

But...

...Your flow seemed really off...i didn't see any inners in there to help to unevern bars flow and the rhyme scheme was really hard to follow...either that or there wasn't no kept one...

Word holla and tell me the rhyme scheme, if there is one

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ur flow was kinda off but i was feelin the whole
topic and ur rhyme scheme was koo.. but keep
workin on ya flow..

peace

THE FLOW WAS OVER THE BEAT TO CANIBU LAST TRACK ON THE NEW ALBUM I DID RUSH IT JUST TO GET MY IDEAS OUT I SPIT IT TP IT AND MY STYLE IT MATCHES BUT MY STYLE IS ODD WITH OVERLAPS SPEED LINE THEN SLOW LINES INTWINE TOGEATHER THAT'S WHY MOST CATS LIKE ME TO SPIT A RHYME INS6TEAD OF READING ONE I HOPE TO GET AUDIO SOON WHEN I DO MY STRUCTURE WILL SPEAK FOR ITSELF I HOPE THNKS FOR THE FEED BACK

UP

The first word that came to my mind was colossal. I was definitely feeling it. I suppose we could pick up on the flow better listening to it than reading it. It was raw.

thanks