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Old 09-07-03, 06:38 PM   #1
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|[Pain of Glares]|

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Everywhere I travel I get glares of venomous hate
because im different, because im of a different race
Why am I put 2nd rate, I put my pants on the same way
living for the moment to be treated equal, that will be the day
when . . humans no longer glare, they glance and move on
only to see another person, no ones labeled wrong
my skin burns in pools of enraged eyes that stare at me
im a fuck up, I was a crime when I was born aparently . .
ive been beaten and treated like shit is that freedom to you??
put on trial for something I didnt do, with no chance to dispute
cant speak my own point of view, cus those eyes still glare
those eyes that despise me, that killed everything I cared
live a life of despair, why does everything have to be like this
no thoughts of equality, that notion has been dismissed . .
glares from nazi's 2 jews,and blacks from white simpremists
im societies menace . . giving the world something to look at
glares from people looking for away of removal, im a lab rat
the same eyes stare, havent they seen enough of my torture
now im afraid to look at myself, so ill paint them a portrait
feel no need for pity . . ive made the best out of my life
those glares are what killed me . . there my death strike .....

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Old 09-07-03, 06:51 PM   #2
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feel no need for pity . . ive made the best out of my life
those glares are what killed me . . there my death strike .....

^ my fav line it was a il lass topic like a storyline
shit.. keep dat up .. had alot of good thoughts in
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return the love and drop sum feed please .. its called hype for the heart... thanx

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Old 09-07-03, 06:57 PM   #3
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Thank you....

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Old 09-07-03, 07:13 PM   #4
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nice shit, why do people hate you anyways?

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Everywhere I travel I get glares of venomous hate
because im different, because im of a different race


nice opening

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feel no need for pity . . ive made the best out of my life
those glares are what killed me . . there my death strike .....

nice ending lol

return da favour on my thread
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Old 09-07-03, 07:18 PM   #5
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Thank you . . .

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Old 09-07-03, 07:32 PM   #6
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nice drop dawg
nice flow and vocab
keep it up
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Old 09-07-03, 07:54 PM   #7
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Thanks .....

Upping this for some feedback
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Old 09-07-03, 07:59 PM   #8
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dope....

.... period
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Old 09-07-03, 09:10 PM   #9
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Thanks ......

...... uppin

Bit your.......

........ ssttyyllee
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Old 09-07-03, 10:07 PM   #10
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I was definitely feeling that! All of it, your words were strong from start to finish. I liked it. And that last line is raw!

feel no need for pity..i've made the best out of my life..those glares are what killed me..there my death strike...

That's the rawest post I've read today.
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Old 09-07-03, 10:38 PM   #11
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Thanks for the feedback
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Old 09-10-03, 07:31 AM   #12
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Up.
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Old 09-10-03, 07:39 AM   #13
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HOT LIL SUM SUM NO DOUBT TWIN I IKED IT
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