All started wit a foul an illegal push on a fast break//
One swing broke a fight and they was both baked//
Jumped up looked at him and glared him in the eye//
Said watch ya back and it wasn't no lie//
Got up the next mornin' and him and his crew//
Stood out on his doorstep down the stairs he flew//
Opened the door bravely and said what are u doing//
He held his head down and said he was down for the shooting//
He said look man it was just game we over reacted//
He said i know man but then he pulled out his magnum//
Gunshot next thing you know his friend was dead//
All because of a fuckin' drug that made em' lose they head//

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nice drop
nice emotion
i could picture this shit while reading it
very well done
keep droppin
peace

thank you dogg i appreciate the feedback...............

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Yeah, this was alright you know.

It was quite simple in many a sense. But effective nonetheless. I felt the emotinos in it were at times off. Imagery was solid enough. If anything, it had the feel of a street poem in a quite raw form.



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haha well explained feedback ^ appreciated much...

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