beatin u like egg batter-makin u feel flatter,then yo moms chest/
u cant hang wit da best (B.R.E)-betta den da rest/
get off RB and get back wit ur dad- dis nigga likes da insect/
i got clips to stop this shit-drop this clit (pussy)/
ill sitck my foot in ur ass-and ull be shittin socks/
got this kid stuffed-like a nerd in a locker/
now who u gon say is hotter/
my shit is nice-yo shit is whack-u bout to meet my 4.5 mac/
have u breathin heavy like a asmatic-
you couldnt subside my skill if u was a matamatic/
bitch, im automatic-i dun stop-im systamatic-like all things u will drop/
pop yo ego/
i come from strong vocab-to hot punches/
to havin you cryin tears in bunches/

*its not over yet*
u gon regret startin all of this shit on here/
like a nigga at the gay pride parade- ur queer/
im showin u metaphors/got so many cocks in yo mouth-
u couldnt spit(think bout it ;p)/got yo bitch(mom) wantin dis/
yo mouth is looser then yo moms pussy-this is wat u gettin for pushin me/
i read all ur topics-so i decide to mock-dis-bitch/
like a nigga wit no money-ur funny/
prob from San Franscio-in the parade "Home of the fag"/
got a dick in ur ear-got a cock in ur ass/
nigga no holes open at all-got ur bitch bouncin off da wall/
im sick like dat-
like a male wit no penis-shock knows i mean this/
illest shit-and hes seen piss/wit a lisp-u glisp onto my FLOW's/
cant say s's's correctly-i suspectly think uve been "rejected"
more then a kid without hands/
last part made no sense and it was stilly funny/
peace

to be honest nig...you aint reppin whateva you tryin to hold correctly....yo flow, wordplay, vocab is all wacked...to be honest wit you...im not feelin ya flow whatsover...im just not gonna browse ova this...im lettin you know why you gettin slept on....fix ya style duke...you still need to do some more homework (i.e.-battle...read other, iller cats work...n keep workin!)...cuz this aint cuttin it ma nig


igido

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RN Vs RB WAR!!....yr 2000...vet~~YEA I SAID VET!! WHAT YOU WANT ME TO PROVE IT? STEP THEN YOU FUCKING HOMO'S

lol... yea i freestyle better on da mic, it just comes 2 me

nah duke...imma be real wit you...when you spit on the mic...then bring fire to the mic...dont make excuses..."excusses are tools of incompetance, used to build monuments of nothingness, and those who specialize in them are seldom good at ANYTHING they do."....believe ma nig...you apply that and you'll get better...

right now...you spittin text...so you better bring fire to the text....dont be scared of what i say to you...use it as a tool to get better duk...cuz from what im readin from you right now..if you serious about this...you need to get to work!

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RN Vs RB WAR!!....yr 2000...vet~~YEA I SAID VET!! WHAT YOU WANT ME TO PROVE IT? STEP THEN YOU FUCKING HOMO'S