10-15 lines im bouta smoke sum club bom
so ill be droppin soon..

no crew votes no newb votes..

Your just a style hugger so i'll let my style huvver, and spit the luscious butter, like a busted rubber, in your trusted lover.
Speaking of wich have you seen your girl lately SON?
My name is JB1 fuckin your babies mum with an infested rabie gun
The ladies dumb, and it was easy to up and mack the slut,
just a sack of nuts, my massive gut and half a pack of butts,
you versus me your gettin tossed in the brawl, lodging fragments of your jaw through the top of your skull, your options to fall,
And if your not dead i think you best pretend you are, i'm so relentless with every sentance so even than your even messed with scars.
I'm more than hot,burn an MC with equisite force, you couldnt singe a corpse if you lifted a jerry can and the olympic torch,
Your just a spoiled brat who lives in your moms basement suite,
has ends but no friends and pretends with a vacant seat, this is just a simple fact, you stupid fuck it ain't discreet, but when i throw a punch i'm swingin hard enough to break the street
you get taped and beat, placed in defeat as i wats your feet denting up your dads replacement jeep.

^^ COO SHIt./...hers heat.

With nouns used… you ain’t better-than-me//
our skills have a wider gap than Letterman’s teeth//
better retreat… it was Tragic for you to advance, u claim u from planet earth//
just another fan of my works in my text and flow, ya challenge is regrettable//
get the message hoe, fuck a gat, a no show’s best-to-pull//
in general… cause I’m always dropping a masterpiece//
this bastard’s weak- who can match wit’s with this MC//
ya literacy is sub par, I read literally at a different speed//
a little rusty… but still sharp as a blade that cuts deep//
trust me on my worst day- ya word play don’t touch me//
fuck peace, I release with smart bomb precision//
stick a fork in ‘em- he’s done and I feast on the competition//
this monsta’s mission…. is to leave-ya-missin//
fuck splittin ya wig… ya weave-I’m-liftin//
savagely, I ravage… better rapidly retreat//
or meet the man known to happily cause the agony of defeat//
SWITCH IT>>
I’ll kick it into high gear, kid; I’ll pump the throttle//
I’ll have your flow contained like alcohol that comes in bottles//
Go fucking practice, this is what you should be heading for//
Try and spit a punchline that I haven’t said before//
The “quotes” and-the-dashes (kid, it just doesn’t fit)//
You can’t pronounce any of that bull shit when you spit//
It’s pointless; just go practice how you’re writing a sentence//
If people can’t figure it out when they hear it, it aint nice to begin with//

just another fan of my works in my text and flow, ya challenge is regrettable//
get the message hoe, fuck a gat, a no show’s best-to-pull//
^^PRETTy good for a newbie

little rusty… but still sharp as a blade that cuts deep//
trust me on my worst day- ya word play don’t touch me//
fuck peace, I release with smart bomb precision//
stick a fork in ‘em- he’s done and I feast on the competition//
this monsta’s mission…. is to leave-ya-missin//
fuck splittin ya wig… ya weave-I’m-liftin//
DAMN HOT SKILLS KId

It’s pointless; just go practice how you’re writing a sentence//
If people can’t figure it out when they hear it, it aint nice to begin with//
NICE CLOSER^^

I'm more than hot,burn an MC with equisite force, you couldnt singe a corpse if you lifted a jerry can and the olympic torch,
Your just a spoiled brat who lives in your moms basement suite,
has ends but no friends and pretends with a vacant seat, this is just a simple fact, you stupid fuck it ain't discreet, but when i throw a punch i'm swingin hard enough to break the street
you get taped and beat, placed in defeat as i wats your feet denting up your dads replacement jeep.
^^ pretty ok nuthin speacual

I thought menally ill came ahrder better punches an personals rhymed sik as fuk
good battle vote M Ill

for sum resaon i cant Poll it it doenst let me can sumone let me poll it...aite..pc.........uppin....................... .....................................

Mentally ill whats up? did you set this shit up properly?
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uppin foreal where da voters attttttttttttttttttttttttttt
sumone hit this up...where da voters at..forealllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll lllllllllllllll

Good battle, props to both, i liked both verses but Mentally had the better punches i thought and i was feeling his verse more, so my vote goes to mentally

mentally ill came nice as fuck...wordplay hit nicely with
his punches...good disses...flow had heat..good shizzle

jb1 this verse here was much betta than ya last
battle verse..good disses.. punches were ok...wordplay was good but did'nt have that fie!!..choose yourself a couple newbies onya level
to elevate a lil more...

vote mentally

where r da voters at foreal da true voters front lines is fallin parart me need vote si nhere ill hit ya shit up im hi as fuk....
uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Ight, JB1 had some multis but lacked in punches

Mentally Ill had both multis, punches, and creatitivity
better laid out shit

vote = Mentally Ill

Im votin honest on dis shit,

can ya'll vote on dis battle so i can get shit started?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78905

thnx yo

vote- JB


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^^^ WTF IS THAT FOreal IGET 3 REAl votes ^^ wtf is that foreal amby feeble^^^ wtf is that ...wow ive never seen anything like it.....its like he dik rides for an occupatuon damn kid make it any more obvious