15 barz minimum you spit first

what are you doing ? writting a fuckin term paper? hurry up with this shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................

He means 15 lines
Your rhymes are "unheard" of like a deaf-mute talking to himself/
Only elevation you've done...is while leveling your shelf/
I shit on your HEALTH, and you need a "stainless"-steel-fist/
Cuz fisting-yourself is the only way you could hand me some "shit"/
Your punches "HIT" like little kids playing Murder Inc...(not hard at all)/
Call me "cold-water" the way im makin ya' chances shrink.../
You give me a WINK and ill rip your eyes ata ya skull and shove them down ya throat so you can "watch" me kick-your-ass/
Pull my foot out and give your "brass-back"(steelfist), I'll light you on fire so you can really claimed you've rolled in the "grass"!/
Here's part of my PAST, let me show you the silver-lining/
Fucking your girl is the only way I could afford "fine-dining"/
Like a FLYING navy, your style "bites" so much that it has rabies/
I wear the Nicotine patch-so-that YOU avoid cravings.../

13th line, here's your unlucky one...

Let's be sensibal, your fuckin wit funda-mentalz........./
Only time you "re-load lead" is on your mechanical pencil!/
Retrace that^^like it was a STENCIL and you were playing with spyrograph../
Poor kid~ fightin with chinese-people only time he holds part of a "staff" (never had a job)

Weak finish but itll be enough to beat you, ive seen what u can do...
spit man...

IM NOT IMPRESED BY THIS FAGGET HIS RECORD IS 9 AND 5/
YOU WANT TO FRONT.. GO AHEAD.. RHYME AND DIE/
SON FUNDAMENTALLY SPEAKING.. IM NOT IMPRESSED BY THE SHIT THAT YOUR SPEAKING/
CUZ THE ONLY TIME YOU FLOW.. IS WHEN ITS THAT TIME OF THE MOUNTH AND YOUR LEAKING/
I DONT KNOW WHAT YOUR SEEKING.. BUT WHAT YOULL GET IS SHOTS TO THE DOME PIECE/
ILL HIT YOUR JAW SO HARD THAT YOULL BE SHITTIN OUT YOUR OWN TEETH/
FUNDAMENTALLY SPEAKING MY RHYMES ARE SOMETHING YOU RIDE TO THE BAR/
IM THE TYPE OF NIGGA TO MARRY YOUR MOMS, AND INSTEAD OF CANS, ILL HAVE YOUR BODY TIED TO THE CAR/


THIS SHIT AINT PRETTY DOG, YOU SHOULDNT BE SLACKIN OFF/
CUZ YOUR LYRICS ARE WACK - N- SOFT, AND THE ONLY TIME YOUR GETTING OFF IS WHEN YOUR JACKING OFF ON YOUR MACINTOSH/
YOU NEED TO START BACKING OFF, CUZ YOUR FACE IS SOMETING IM SMACKING OFF/
ILL PUNCH YOR ASS IN THE THROAT HAVE YOU COUGHING UP "BLOOD" LIKE YOU HAD A HACKING COUGH/

shit.. nice ass battle. but ill have to give it to steelfist.. his shit was much more complex as far as his rhyming patterns

"THIS SHIT AINT PRETTY DOG, YOU SHOULDNT BE SLACKIN OFF/
CUZ YOUR LYRICS ARE WACK - N- SOFT, AND THE ONLY TIME YOUR GETTING OFF IS WHEN YOUR JACKING OFF ON YOUR MACINTOSH/
YOU NEED TO START BACKING OFF, CUZ YOUR FACE IS SOMETING IM SMACKING OFF/
ILL PUNCH YOR ASS IN THE THROAT HAVE YOU COUGHING UP "BLOOD" LIKE YOU HAD A HACKING COUGH/"

i like that shit there he rhymed like 7 stragith mulit syllabel's shit was crazy

"ill punch you in the throat have you coughing up blood liek you had a hacking cough"

damn!

vote:steelfist

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"My intelligence begins where yours peaks at" ~Canibus

^^HATER, just cause i beat you.... and if you consider a multi rhyming the same word 5 times then no wonder your record is 0-3
uppin for some Real Votes!.........

lol.. dont get mad.. just cuz i voted for him..

face it his shit was better than yours and

i siad multi sylabbels son said "the only time your getting off is when your jacking off on your macintosh"

now machintosh rhymes perfectly with jacking off.. that shwy i voted for him.. because his shit was more complex than your shit

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"My intelligence begins where yours peaks at" ~Canibus

well then that would be considered flow, not a multi...go read the tutorials...and if u wanna lose a battle again feel free to bitch slap me....and how come you didnt get banned yet for freeposting in front lines??

fundamentaz quit trying to sway votes man.. son came in and stated why he voted for me................................................ .................................................. .................................................. ........

uppin............................................. .................................................. ........................

damn i left for a few hrs and its already at the bottom of pg 2....uppin(4)..................................... ..............................................

YO, im'a have to disagree... i felt F M"s a More

I have never seen someone on here type in all caps but it is a deFinate "Turn Off" for tha reader.....

But yo.

Flow FM
Structure FM
multi's Steelfist
Personals Steelfist
Punches FM
Meti's Fm
Vote Fm

Hit Me Back On these Two Wit a Honest One ......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78601
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78662

close battle but i thought fundamentals took it wit punches flow metas and consistancy tight battle

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ok i dont know if my vote counts but here it is.
Bolyh rhymes were descent, but it it seems like FM sets up his punches with "the only time" or "the only way" like everytime.
Bolth had good flow but i think steel fist was a bit better in this battle. He seems a little more polished and his lines were just a bit stronger.


Flow: steel fist
Clarity:steel fist
Creativity: equal
Multies: steel fist
punches: steel fist

I vote: steel fist

Funda Mental won easily in my opinion
his punches hit harder, and he had better flow, better meti's

steel fist had some personal's , but overall funda won this battle

please drop an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78631