kept it real I was ever concearned with wagers and pagers-
And you think I don’t deserve to be in the majors?
You’re an ageless~ignoramus!
so simple minded your simpley blinded only using LAYMENS-
as a term to associate with gay~men.
Now you want to fence-with words and not get offencive?
everything comes at a price a battle free(style) from me can gets expensive-
bodily damage plus career scars extensive-malfunctions to brains making your nerve responce inapprehensive.
Im wanna of the dopest m.c.’s the world will ever see!
so dope in fact that the cat who smokes me will pro~ba~bly die too of an O.D.!
And I know it… but I stay wilden that’s just M.K.C.
I’ll end you career sadly faster then CHICO DABaRGE’s 3rd cd. Basically….
in battles throw on r&b-cause that is the only chance you will ever have of fucken with me.
My tenacity plus damn right ordasity-helps me shit on m.c. like my colon was packed at full compacity.
i have to be one of the most persistent consistent rapper’s with my flows and treble-
cause if I spit it…it raises the earths’ water level.
I keeps it BUBBLEN no wonder the rap world feels unsettled.
cheap rappers talken on they chump change cause they was chump changed-
im dicken anything within hump range.
Everyone anyone as long as I’ve won I don’t care boute being crunk-
Im whoreing the game cause you’d have to pay me to give a fuck!
CREAM FOR CREAM IF YOU GET WHAT I MEAN-
YOU THINK YOUR THAT DOPE YOU’RE A&R IS SELLING YOU PIPE DREAMS.
With GOLDEN SHOWER festishes of gowing MAIN STREAM.
Im a one man team-with a team of guilletens-
a guilletene team that cuts rap cracks for mic fiends.
get on tracks...get it ....im on track?so bump me in you mp3-
pump me into your fifteens-and if now play while your hustlen your triple beams.i concearned on how it seams-i worry boute how they are. youd' have to go to detox from the proof in my bars.
LOL woops i let that out-you a dime im an uncut ounce-you garbage im big weight nigga bounce.

good spit, stayed on point well, flowed good i liked your ending the best i thought, i liked how you rapped up thaty last bar it was interesting, keep droppin man

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The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
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thnks twin

u still doing your thing man, shit was hot...
I'm feeling the aggressiveness of it...
shit was flowing pretty well... it was a bit off at points, but not much...
and the shit had strong vocab...
keep on spittin' man...

-1-

lol....hard vocab...i like that..!!!

and theres a hint of sharpness, it kinda got me into it...i dno if it was the ruggednes of it...or something ells..!!!

i was gona say keep elevating,since mant ppl in open mic needs to....But it would be kinda silly on this 1.......

another thing aswell..!! THAT WAS REALLY A REALLY DIFFIRENT KINDA FLOW...!!

props to u Word Perfect....it makes my day reading time worthy versus..1!!


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78988 can any 1 return the favour please..!!!

THNK YOU THAT MEANS ALOT TO ME I WANT TO BE AUTHENTIC AND I WANT TO MAKE MY READ WORTH IT TO PEOPLE I APRESIATE YOUR FEED BACK

UPPIEN

it had a nice concept, good flo

damn dawgy... you gettin pretty consistent with these drops... another nice one mang... keep droppin nicca

thnks pop i will

u still rippin it dude. the vocab was kool, as was the wordplay. the flow was on and the concept kicked ass. good post and cant wait to read more of 'em.

this was a good spit, i think what i saw first tho, was that it was nt as structured as i like, but you made up with some pretty dope content and wordplay:

Now you want to fence-with words and not get offencive?
everything comes at a price a battle free(style) from me can gets expensive-
bodily damage plus career scars extensive-malfunctions to brains making your nerve responce inapprehensive.

that was pretty good, i think you could improve your flow tho, maybe that comes with the structure...

cheap rappers talken on they chump change cause they was chump changed-
im dicken anything within hump range.

LOL, that second lines funny mans...nice...

CREAM FOR CREAM IF YOU GET WHAT I MEAN-
YOU THINK YOUR THAT DOPE YOU’RE A&R IS SELLING YOU PIPE DREAMS.
With GOLDEN SHOWER festishes of gowing MAIN STREAM.
Im a one man team-with a team of guilletens-
a guilletene team that cuts rap cracks for mic fiends.

that was probably the best overall section, especially the a & r bit, that was good content and spittin,

i ain't too sure on your repeatin stuff e.g:

cheap rappers talken on they chump change cause they was chump changed-

but it was a good spit, mainly for its content and wordplay/vocab...keep spittin...PEACE

peep my spit "LET LOOSE" AND DROP FEED....

AIGHT NO DOUBT TWIN