i forgot to check box... ignore last thread
10 lines anything goes

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ease up turbo, you gotta break it down/
you think your king but ima take your crown/
ima newbie to this forum, diss me all ya want/
but whatever i do i cant stop you gettin that doodle that ya want/
im probably gonna loose but i dont really care/
all i want is for you to be pullin ur hair/
this rap game its a trip back to year 8/
when the ugly english teacher told me to concentrate/
im really crap at poetry as you can see now/
but its still not gonna stop me from takin yo black ass down/

Big pimpin, donkey boy sit down and listen
Pull out ya pen and take some notes, Get your eyes of the goats
No hits or kicks in ya lyrics, For me its as easy as spellig 123
Pullin hair is for bitches, i'll leave ya in a ditch wit 16 stitches!
Watch out im a bomb waitin to explode, tick tick tick im in the gloom of night, untouchable and out of sight
Can't touch what u can't see, step out of the gloom, Prepare do meet your doom, six caps in ya gut , your outta luck.
Now ive left ya dead on tha ground, It all went down without a sound, walking off with a grin on my face, just pulled off ya murder witch the cops can't trace, U best step up and pick up the pace!

uppin 4 votes now ppl............................................... .................................................. ..................

From what I see...
Clearly a newb battle.

But that's cool, we all gotta start somewhere.

Much better format and flow by Donks...
Trouble is he didn't throw a single punch.

Neither did Monkey Boy, I even re-read both of em.
Not one single punch between the two of you.

Find one for me if I'm mistaken.

But Monkey Boy at least had the meaner verse.
Expressed how he wanted to hurt him which is more than Donks did.

When posting battles, imagine hurting ya opponent's feelings.
Threats about bodily harm might sound good, but they don't hurt feelings.

Go with that mentality, ya'll.

Peace

Overall: MonkeyBoy

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