this is my first recorded shit, nothing i took to much time to make jus something to get feedback on

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/mcoddmusic.htm

hit me back

someone was afraid of their parents hearin them record

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stick to text plz

stop freepostin u fags

HAHAHA..LMAO At Spliv & MP HAHAH

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werd this dude thought he was recordin in a Whisper Room lol. try recordin again when your parents are gone and when ur not ashamed that u make music.

what!?..

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im lookin for somthin positive, not u fucks jus hndin out disses........oh ya, nice cd "gangsta"

....damn....stop....jus stop....go take the garbage out or something....you were waaaaaay to quiet and the lyrics were bad anyway...

pieces

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^lighten up on the kid, all of you . . this is hip hop . . not a clownin' session . .

add some emotion to your voice .. dont be afraid to get loud .. it sounds like your reading off a piece of paper .. its just you and the mic .. noone else .. work on your flow a little bit, just practice, practice, practice .. it took me 8 months to even establish a voice .. audio takes patience, determination, and heart .. if you have those three things, you can do audio .. if not, put the mic down now and go back to text .. either you want this or you dont ..

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^^exactly my point. he was just nice about it. I'm just an asshole that likes to fuck wit newbs lol. seriously... if u are embarassed to record when people can hear you then wait till theyre gone. after u get good you wont care anymore, but a lot of people get stage fright.

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thnx for the positive feedback swoop, these kids giving me negative shit should jus stop now cuz i aint goin away..........

hahah gzus you know everybody just fuckin wit chu. but sal and spliv are right. dont be ashamed to spit but you gotta be rappin though. the only person that can pull off that type of style is snoop dogg and maybe bahamadia.