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Old 09-12-03, 03:42 AM   #1
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In a FLASH.... I rip your chest out like… brawds at marti graus-
Drop an on~slaw that drops jaws and leave you supporting it in a girls bra.
You devils get the hell nah!!!!!!!!
Bro check it… this Is lyrical combat-and im at my pinacle of rap.
at this point im fucking you like I had a porn contract.
“Yo I herd you were the shit”
yeah! and I wont dip wont slip wont trip-but will flip-
Leaven you unable to process a rhyme with a 32 bit- pantium chip-Dell kit.
Dawg fucken with me is 3rd strike- you out!-what I write is my blood type-
But you the trife- type right?
want it with me?
stick your dick in your diary and fuck up your life.
Do you know anything aboute riches drugs slugs whips and bitches?
Do you see to what comes out your mouth?
besides my nut you sliding- on frequent flyers vibing- from dick riding.
im just analyzen and though it’s appetizen-Id rather stay hungry, rep new york with a million dollar PUNCH like MIKE TYSON.
It seams lifes a bitch and you prostituting yours.
HOLD UP, I aint mean that in metaphor.
But like orgasms it just cums out that way.
And like back spazams I can snap verdabrays-with a lyrical array-to display-like a weigth scale-your career status is gay no nowonder you like fan male’s(mail)
See I rap not hip hop I told you that…..rhymen is centered with these clubs I thought we had pop for that.
if not then I shouldn’t get more pay than my djay!
People don’t listen to the words enough-nigguz like LIL JON yell he don’t give a fuck-cause he knows listeners that listen think he sucks.
You spit 12 bars in 12 months I barely been here a year-and have dropped enough consitant joints to get the world high or deal a career.
Life is what you make it and im making mine-in the shape of a air powered rolex to stay ahead of time.

this is for my tryout to OMENS

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Old 09-12-03, 05:08 AM   #2
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Old 09-12-03, 05:30 AM   #3
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this shit was hotness...but you ain't had to try out...I already told you that you was in if ya wanted...but you had some nice punchez and wordplay...also the flow was hot...as was the vocab...ya know...same as usual...lol...
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Old 09-12-03, 05:31 AM   #4
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I especially liked that "stick ya dick in ya diary so you can fuck up ya life" or something like that...that line stuck out to me...
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Old 09-12-03, 05:35 AM   #5
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thnks twin im ready to give OMENS 150percent
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Old 09-12-03, 05:52 AM   #6
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aiiight...I fuckin' love you man...welcome to da fam...
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Old 09-12-03, 05:55 AM   #7
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lol i need a sig
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Old 09-12-03, 05:58 AM   #8
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yo empty your mail in your pm i got some ish for the crew im working now
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Old 09-12-03, 06:46 AM   #9
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aiiight...my mailbox has been cleaned...
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Old 09-12-03, 10:17 AM   #10
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King^ Shorten your sig bud. You can probably just adjust it so there side by side, someone else in your crew has them set up like that. That sould work I believe.
Thanks.
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Old 09-12-03, 12:00 PM   #11
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HELLO BRUKLOR HOW ARE YOU?
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Old 09-12-03, 12:28 PM   #12
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Old 09-12-03, 12:34 PM   #13
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nice shit man, no doubt

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Old 09-12-03, 12:59 PM   #14
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u had a good concept, nice floe
vocab could use a lill work, but over all it as good
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Old 09-13-03, 01:35 AM   #15
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thanks twin you the one cat i aint gonna rest until you tell me the vocab was on point
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