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Old 09-12-03, 12:36 PM   #1
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From: Where ever competion may be
Reminiscing the past

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You left me to die in the abyss~of~pain//
Was most likely to hide from your fist~that~rain//
Down so heavy that it even almost felt da same//
Like 1,000 deadly venoms rushing thru my vein//
I remained a scared child engulfed in da horror//
To face every hour witnessing my own mother//
Be a victim to abuse ~ what's the use//
Of pursuing a marriage if it's only ~ death in a carriage?//
Life was hard growin up where I'm from//
Got a whole family surviving on only one income//
All ma dad do is drink brew, smoke and fuck//
Any slut when he gets the chance and pull a stunt//
That he's busy on the job, and the stress goes on//
As a child lived on watching dad beats his mom//
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Old 09-12-03, 12:40 PM   #2
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that was tight... i liked the flow and vocab...
you had some tight ass lines too man...
say, dont post so many... the mod will close all
of you post
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Old 09-12-03, 12:49 PM   #3
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thnx fo da props and iiight, ill try not to
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Old 09-12-03, 12:49 PM   #4
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u had a nice vocab, good cocept
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Old 09-12-03, 05:55 PM   #5
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pretty deep...
concept ain't too damm original... but still, I got respect for it...
shit was pretty short... could have been longer...
and it flowed pretty good...

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Old 09-12-03, 06:44 PM   #6
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thnx fo peepin but i dont like to make long spits cuz i dont like reading em myself and also its not a song so im not gonna crowd a whole page on just one topic

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