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Reminiscing the past
IP:
You left me to die in the abyss~of~pain//
Was most likely to hide from your fist~that~rain// Down so heavy that it even almost felt da same// Like 1,000 deadly venoms rushing thru my vein// I remained a scared child engulfed in da horror// To face every hour witnessing my own mother// Be a victim to abuse ~ what's the use// Of pursuing a marriage if it's only ~ death in a carriage?// Life was hard growin up where I'm from// Got a whole family surviving on only one income// All ma dad do is drink brew, smoke and fuck// Any slut when he gets the chance and pull a stunt// That he's busy on the job, and the stress goes on// As a child lived on watching dad beats his mom// |
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IP:
that was tight... i liked the flow and vocab...
you had some tight ass lines too man... say, dont post so many... the mod will close all of you post A.T. |
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IP:
thnx fo da props and iiight, ill try not to
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IP:
u had a nice vocab, good cocept
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IP:
pretty deep...
concept ain't too damm original... but still, I got respect for it... shit was pretty short... could have been longer... and it flowed pretty good... -1- |
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IP:
thnx fo peepin but i dont like to make long spits cuz i dont like reading em myself and also its not a song so im not gonna crowd a whole page on just one topic
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