fuck the honor of death i should have been chosen/
sacrifice my place on this earth for christopher rios and lamont coleman/
hip hops hear broken the pain from ur demise dawg hasnt soaked in/
niggas cloaked in darkness entirely/
feelin rap is the only expression to buck at this society/
from Chuck to Kris parker the philosopher/
taught us that queen hip hop offered her/
love and devout attention/
how niggas use bigs and makevli in vain in every other sentence/
my bad dawg im ventin why lil kims a top 22 mc while kool g raps name was never mentioned?/
this stressed out how white america is scared of her/
tried to break her/
passed resolutions putin a gag order in the legislatures/
senators catchin vapors without Biz Markie in the video/
check out every genre of entertainment whose ur hero ho?/
its a nigga oh my bad African American/
but when u think about it whats an American?/
original inhabitants languished in reservations/
while the majority eats of the fruits of this nation/
fuck that let hip hop speak/
niggas will only learn if we can teach/

i was feelin that, the concept was pretty good, the vocab was nice, the flow was ill, and overall id rate it a 8-9/10. good shit dude.

appreciate the opinion keep it comin

The concept i liked a good bit.

Jews don't salute the fuckin swastika
but niggaz pledge allegiance to the flag that accosted ya

^That is pretty damn true.

8/10... Complexity was lacking but the vocab made up for it... Keep dropping.

straight piece,good points,good vocab,good structure,vivd imagery,over all nice piece,keep droppin tha hotness.~1~

Not a bad piece my man. .

Flow was pretty decent as io read it, could of been tightened slightly by using more internals and multi's but it wasnt too bad, i liked the concept actually - just wish you'd of tried on this piece instead of posting it as a keystyle because this could of turned out pretty nice. You raised a few good points and actually rounded off the piece on a high note - i thought the last line was the best in that verse actually.

Eace-Pay!

Oh, And Reply To Mine Feat. Abolish! = )

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